Desperate

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Eliza02 (01), Nov 9, 2011.

  1. Bump.

    Read my story called The Perfect Two. It's my first one and I want to know what people think.:)
     
  2. Chelsea's point of view:

    BANG
    BANG
    BANG

    Ugh. My head hurts so much. It as if there is World War 1 in there.

    As I scanned the room, I realized that I was in the hospital again.
    Tubes were connected to me.
    Flowers surround me.
    And worse, hospital food was waiting for me.

    "When will this end?" I cried out sorrowfully.

    Actually, I don't really remember what happened yesterday.
    All I know is that cruel Ken broke up with me and left me in the park. Then, I suddenly blacked out.

    I have a feeling that I do not want to remember the rest.

    *Ring*

    I grabbed my cellphone to see who texted. They are from my parents...

    "Dear, your father and I will be staying overnight at the office. So, just prepare your own breakfast. Love you."

    Huh?! So that means they do not even know that I am in the hospital?!

    I angrily threw my cellphone.
    "Some parents." I mumbled as I got out from bed and disconnected all the tubes that clung to me.

    As I opened the door, a sleeping figure greeted me.

    "Rick?" I softly whispered, totally surprised.

    Wh-what is he doing here at this hour?! It's 5:16 am! Don't tell me he...




    ... he waited for me?!

    I slowly picked up the papers scattered on the floor.

    "Hey Chelsea!"
    "Dear Chelsea,"

    Those words made me tear up. Although the letters were not finished, I felt the love in them.

    Then, I grabbed the last paper on the floor. As I read what was written, my tears fell continuously. It says...

    "Hey Chelsea! How are you doing? I know you are going through a very hard time right now. I just want to let you know that I will be with you till the very end. I will be with you even if the whole world goes against you. As a friend, as an enemy, as a lover, I'll accept them all." -Rick

    I looked at Rick who was sleeping soundly. I felt the sudden urge to hug him.

    "He really does love you." the head nurse commented as he passed by me.

    I knelt down beside him and whispered, "I should have fallen in love with you."

    I turned away and got up, but a hand grabbed my arm.

    I turned around and a bright smile greeted me.

    "Chelsea, you should have."
     
  3. That claims to be the first...

    It's not the first but it CLAIMS to be.. 
     
  4. BUMP BUMP BUMP!!
     
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  6. So amazing its sad and happy at the same time j loved it from the start
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