Desperate

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Eliza02 (01), Nov 9, 2011.

  1. Wooow. This is good. BUMP! :)
     
  2. Dale's point of view:

    "... HEARTBREAK." I said while smirking.
    I said that because I wanted to taunt Rick, but I was wrong. He took it too seriously.

    Rick slammed the door shut. His eyes were feiry red. He was shaking terribly.

    Uh-oh.
    I just brought out the beast in him.

    "So, what are you going to do now, loverboy?" Regina mocked.

    I signaled Regina to not anger Rick much further. Expectedly, Regina looked away and completely ignored me.

    "Are you going to kill Ken now?" Regina continued while smiling evily. She was clearly enjoying this.

    "Stop, Regina. It's not helping." I firmly ordered while staring at Rick who was completely frozen.

    Regina let out a laugh.
    "You were the one who invited me." she reminded while twisting her blond hair.

    Oops. I forgot.
    I was the one who invited her.
    It's just that...
    I thought she still has a HEART underneath all her thick make-up and slutty clothes.

    Obviously, I was ENTIRELY wrong.

    But, I don't care about that anymore.
    I'm more concerned about Rick.
    Anytime, he can go crazy and can kill somebody.

    "So, how will you kill Ken? I suggest you use poison rather than a gun. Gun's too messy." Regina suggested.

    Feeling intense anger, I seized her hand and twisted it.
    I bid my gentlemanliness GOODBYE.

    "OUCH!" Regina yelped. She was over-reacting. I was not even using full force yet.

    "Stop." Rick ordered gently.

    I let go off Regina's hand.

    "You'll pay for this, Dale! I'll tell you to my father and he'll surely destroy you!" Regina threatened as she pointed a finger to me.

    I sighed.
    "How would your father do that when your father's boss is my father?" I smirked.

    Regina's face flushed in embarrassment.
    "Whatever!" Regina shouted and stormed off.

    "So what are you going to do?" I asked gently.

    Rick smiled.
    "I won't do anything."

    I was relieved and confused at the same time.
    "And why?"

    Rick sighed.
    "Because I do not want to hurt the man the Chelsea loves the most."







    WOW.
    I felt myself turn gay that second.
    No, just kidding. :))
    But that was...








    SWEET. :)
     
  3. Just a poll:

    What do you think about my posts?
    A. They are too long! I can't understand it anymore.
    B. They are too short! I need mooore.
    C. The length is okay for me.

    Answers are HIGHLU appreciated. Once I get enough answers, I'll update as soon as I can. :)

    BTW, isn't Rick TOO sweet? Haha. :)
     
  4. First!! BUMP!! my Answer would be C. But I rly want more!!! I love it
     
  5. Bump bumpy bumpity boo..I want moarr!!lol :)
     
  6. My answer is B..lol
     
  7. B and C. Its mixed.  bump!!
     
  8. Rick IS too sweet. He needs to kick Ken's A**!!! 
     
  9. C and since im a guy im not gonna say hes sweet but hes doing the right things he shouldnt hurt ken
     
  10. Oh yeah i have a hunger games post for characters in a story check it out PLEASE
     
  11. The length is good but i want MORE so B!