Desperate

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Eliza02 (01), Nov 9, 2011.

  1. I WANT TO MURDER ADAM
     
  2.  Adam is so evil and cunning and... and... cruel 
     
  3. update!!!  well done!


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  4.  I just re-read the whole story. Too good, but this update. It was a real shocker. Poor Chelsea and Nash as well. I say, Chelsea should just take the scholarship.
     
  5. Nash's point of view:

    Whaaa...
    What just happened?!

    Adam's smile widened.
    "That's why we have come all the way here- to invite you to the renewed engagement party, Chelsea!"

    Chelsea remained unmoved. Her red lips were slightly quivering. But no tears could be seen. She must be doubting the whole thing.

    Ugh. This should not be happening. I was supposed to apologize profusely and to get Rick and Chelsea back together! Kneeling down in desperation was also part of the plan. But what's happening right now? I seemed to be the bad guy again.

    I felt Adam secretly nudge my shoulder. He seemed to be telling me to play along to make all of these false statements look real.

    What should I do?!
    My plan... Rick… They were all ruined!

    Suddenly, the flashback of my encounters in the bar went straight to my brain. I visualized those men, doing their best to please me. But, to no avail, no one could. Only one. He was the one. All this time! Rick was the only one who filled my heart with joy! Rick should be mine!

    Ugh. Damn. Screw the plan. If Rick could not be mine, then no one else could have him.

    My body shook terribly. My tears increased. I sobbed more loudly.
    "I… I'm sorry, Chelsea. I really am."

    Chelsea's eyes enlarged in shock. Adam looked very confused too. He nudged my shoulder.
    "Get a grip." Adam whispered.

    I walked away from Adam and closer to Chelsea. I was sobbing terribly. I just could feel the snot flowing down my nose.

    "Chelsea, I'm sorry… I really wanted you both to be happy…"

    Adam suddenly grasped my arm.
    "What are you doi-"

    "What can I do?!" I interrupted, "I really love Rick! He is my life!"

    Chelsea finally spoke up, "What are you trying to sa-"

    "That's why!" I interrupted once again, "I could not just REJECT HIS OFFER TO MARRY HIM once again!"

    Adam released his grasp on my arm. He must be smiling right now. He must be really proud of me.

    Chelsea looked like her soul left her body. Her mouth was slightly open. She looked utterly broken.

    Haha. You thought I was giving up on Rick, no? As if. I just couldn't give him to Chelsea. I mean, Chelsea? She was a total turn-off!

    I added the crying effects to make all seem real. The quivering of the body, the tears … they're all fake!

    Adam walked back to my side and slightly nudged my shoulder to congratulate me.

    I increased my sobs so that it would totally fool that foolish Chelsea.

    All of a sudden, Chelsea closed her mouth. I expected her to go wild, to wail like a baby or to slap me hard across the face.

    She turned her piercing eyes on us. She slowly opened her mouth and said,

    "You know what?
















    … I am happy for you. Congratulations."




     
  6. Feesbacks are warmly welcomed.

    Once again, I would like to thank everyone who continuously supports this story. Means a lot. Much much appreciated! 
     
  7. *Feedbacks. Lolololol.
     
  8. Ogamuga amazing as always I love it I really do and how evil are they I can't believe Adam I really hate that guy
     
  9. I think you already know how I feel about this.
     
  10.  smart Chelsea  I hope she will get the truth though 
     
  11.  So she's gonna take the scholarship eh? I was shocked, thinking that Nash would actually fess up.

    Blump c:
     
  12. OMG OMG OMG
    BUMP!
     
  13. Finally!

    Bump!
     
  14. Woah, what? 246 pages? I think I lost track around 81 .-.