Wow...this is one of the best FF stories I have ever read!!! I started reading it this morning. My mom kept on telling me to get off my iPod but I told her I can't! She asked why and I said because I'm reading. The whole day, even after cat sitting, the beach, lunch, and my whole day, every single minute if had the opportunity to squeeze in even a paragraph, I did it. This story was AMAZING. A M A Z I N G!!!!! Soooo good!!! Of course, schoolwork comes first, and I understand...but I hope you can continue on with this story!!! Like @The_Fallen_Angel I looked at it thinking that 239 pages was a ton! No way I'm gonna read it all. But hour passed by and it got so intense. I couldn't stop reading it!!! This is great! Please continue!!!! Update!!