Desperate

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Eliza02 (01), Nov 9, 2011.

  1. Ken should just stick with plastic barbie
     
  2. Thanks for the comments. They really made me smile. :)
    I will be updating later. :)
     
  3. bump........plz update soon
     
  4. Bump lol this is one of my favorite fan fic forums
     
  5. Rick's point of view:

    I.Cannot.Believe.This.
    Ken's CHEATING on Chelsea?!
    That can't be. He was literally DYING to go out with her. Maybe I'm just hearing things.

    "Kenny sweetie, I thought you had a girlfriend." the vain girl cooed while twirling his brown hair.

    "Darling, you actually believed that?" he gently answered, giving her a peck on the cheek.

    WHAT?!
    So, he's just PLAYING with Chelsea?

    "I LOVED her. But not anymore. She bores me to death. I need a girl who's exciting!" Ken said while he played with the girl's blond hair.

    The girl let out a cute giggle.
    "I heard that she was bullied by the seniors." she said.

    "Yeah, actually, I knew about their plan all along. I did not stop them because... I do not want to lose my fanclub, you know?" Ken smirked.

    My whole body was shaking in anger.
    My blood was boiling.
    My clenched fists were sweating.

    How could HE do this to CHELSEA??!
    I don't know what to feel anymore.
    I only felt the strong urge to PUNCH Ken straight on the face.

    BUT..

    I knew that I was no match against him.
    Look at those muscles! They are twice as mine.
    He works-out everyday. One punch from him, I'll surely see the bright light from heaven.

    "Are you going to break up with her?" the girl asked while pouting.

    Ken hesitated to answer for a moment. And then, he smiled evily.
    "Nope. I'm going to play with her til my heart's content."

    THAT'S IT.
    The last drop of my PATIENCE was no more.

    Anger.
    Fury.
    Darkness.
    They all surrounded me.

    Who cares if I die anyway?
    At least I died because of protecting the girl I love the most.

    "Ken! You're so DEAD!!" I called out angrily.

    I charged forward with my clenched fist prepared.

    As I ran towards him, I calculated my speed and power. I also calculated the acceleration of my punch.

    OH NO.
    As expected of a trained boxer, Ken shifted his position and was ready to take me on.

    Should I back-away?
    Should I quit?
    Should I surrender?

    NO! I promised to protect Chelsea even if my life depends on it.

    It's now or never.


    5 meters closer...








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    WHACK! CRASH!
     
  6. Omg... Bump 
     
  7.  bump!! 
     
  8. Awee :) BUMPP!
     
  9. ONG!!! GO RICK GO RICK!!
     
  10. Chelsea's point of view:

    Sigh.
    It's nice to get out of the hospital. Food was bad. Injections were painful. Bed is too small.
    It's good to be back.

    Although I feel uncomfortable on how the people are staring, I don't really care. My friends were there to back me up anyway.

    I heard that the seniors who bullied me got suspended. They definitely DESERVED it. They were trying to kill me. Good thing that Rick was there to save me.

    Speaking of Rick, I haven't thanked him properly. Although the kissing-Regina-incident was not still erased in my mind, I guess trusting him again won't be bad at all.

    "OMG! There's a fight at the back of the school!"
    "No, way! Who are fighting?"
    "The student body president and the captain of the boxing club!"

    I froze.
    Is-isn't that Rick and Ken?!

    "What? Rick's definitely lose! He's no match against Ken!"
    "I don't care. Let's just watch the two hotties fight!"

    Unknowingly, I followed the crowd as they all ran at the back of the school.
    Worriedly, I tiptoed to see the fight.

    Oh my, It's the other way around! Rick was the one beating up Ken! Rick's eyes were bloodthirsty and filled with anger.

    "Shocks! A teacher is coming!"

    The angry teacher separated the two bruised and wounded boys. The two were sent to the infirmary as soon as they were finished being scolded and was given the appropriate punishment.

    "Ken?" I asked as I approached his bed.

    Ken didn't answer. His eyes were shut. Bruises and wounds filled his body. The sight made me tear up.
    What just happened?

    As I closed the door of the infirmary, I saw Rick walking along the corridors. When our eyes met, he smiled sadly.

    "Wh-what happened?" I asked nervously.

    "Chelsea, you need to know something. It's about Ken." he said sadly.

    "What is it?" I asked. My palms were sweating. It seemed serious.

    "He's cheating on you." Rick said bluntly.

    WHAT?!
    That can't be.
    Ken loves me, and I'm sure of that.
    Is this one of his petty schemes again?!

    "Stop lying!" I said, my tone getting higher. Tears began to well up in my eyes.

    "Chelsea, you have to beli-"

    "BELIEVE?!" I said. Then, I let out a sarcastic laugh, "Should I still believe you after all those LIES you have been telling to me and Ken?!"

    "Chelsea..."

    "STOP! It's so foolish of me to think that I can trust you again!" I shouted.

    "Chelsea, I'm just worried about your future." he said, looking really concerned.

    This is really making me furious.

    "Tell that to your mom! She chose a DRUNKARD to be her husband." I snapped. Realizing what I've just said, I cupped my hands on my mouth.

    OH NO.
    What did I just say?
    I quickly looked at Rick who looked deeply hurt with what I just said.

    "Sorry, Rick. I did not mean to-"

    "You don't know the whole story, CHELSEA! Don't act so MIGHTY!" he spat.
    "I don't care anymore. Just be with your CHEATING boyfriend."

    "Rick..."

    "Goodbye." Rick said and quickly turned away, leaving me all alone.










    WHAT HAVE I DONE??!
     
  11. I'm sorry that my previous update was very looooooooooong. :)

    Just a question:
    Is the story still okay? Should I still continue it? :)
     
  12. Bump bumpy..continue :)
     
  13. NOOOOOOOOOO! TEAM RICK! Bumpin like theres no tomorrow.