WTF?!?! Nash better not be doing something bad or I'll KILL her. ...Sorry, I'm on a short fuse today. We caught the other team peeking at us during preparation for the second round of our debate competition, and reported them, but the judge didn't do anything! In the end, we still won that round though. And this other school freaking stole Kai,our coach! They were asking him questions about debating and stuff! And since he's supposed to be 'polite' and whatever, he had to answer all of them! Like, WHAT THE FUCK?!?! Just because they don't have a private coach doesn't mean they can steal our Secondary One coach! But, in the end, WE WON THE DEBATE COMPETITION!! (Sorry for the rant... )
YAAY TWO UPDATES Rick seems really low i hope he doesnt kill himself. Nash better not be up to no good, she is unpredictable.
AWWWESOME UPDATES Rick serms really low he might kill himself. Nash better not be up to no good shes unpredictable
What an interesting story! Spent around 7 hours to read all 225 pages but it was totally worth it you're a natural born author gj Eliza
So glad your mom is out of the hospital!. It's always better to have her home than in some hospital missing her children. Anywaysss P.S I LOVE THIS STORY
I love this story!! It's amazing! Pretty much one of the few FF stories I read! Gah!! I <3 it! I have a feeling Nash will probably get 'em together or..... :| ask Adam to find Chelsea. Adam and Chelsea hang out, Nash takes Rick to where they are hanging out, and eventually Chelsea and Adam share a kiss while Rick sees the whole thing.... Blump! :3
Im really enjoying this but I think you need to make their relationship less rockier it's all over the place not realistic and when they go to hospital you need to research what would happen because the diagnosis and symptoms sound unrealistic
Umm. I just want to say that this is the fan fiction section. Most of the stories in this forum are made-up or somewhat unrealistic. I decided to add multiple twists and turns to make the story more interesting to write. But it's okay. I guess the drama got a little carried away. Just wait. All of these chaos will die down eventually. And are you talking about Chelsea's rape incident in page 50 ? Well, I decided not to go in detail. I just don't want to talk about those gruesome "things" in my story. Don't get me wrong. I am not contradicting all you have said. You've got a point, but I also want to explain my point of view. Thanks for the feedback, by the way.