Eliza02 this story is BRILLIANT!! I have just sat and read it all so far and I love it! The plot is fantastic, I love the twists and turns, the characters are great and very convincing! I think I've actually fallen in love with a fictional character called Rick!! I hope you continue to update it as this is (no joke) the best story I have ever read in my life so far!!! You are pure genius, girl! I love your work, keep at it! xx
ZOMG!!!!!! Amazing! I love ittt!! I honestly don't think the principal likes her that way. Lol I think he may be Chelsea's father...Gulp! I dunno.
Chelsea's point of view: The principal inhaled. "I... towards you, Chelsea... I..." I quickly covered my ears. "STOP! I don't want to hear it!" "What? Why?" the principal asked, completely alarmed. "You're 64 years old, and I'm just a 19 year-old girl. This can't be!" I exclaimed hysterically. "Huh?" the principal gasped, totally confused. "I really appreciate your feelings for me. But it just can't be. The age gap is just too huge!" I cried out, making other people stop and watch the two of us. The principal's eyes widened and his jaw automatically dropped. "You're a good man but..." I sighed, "I'm really so sorry." Suddenly, the principal BURST out laughing. "Wha-what m-made you think... (more laughter)... that I was going to confess?" "Were you not...?" I asked. "NO! Of course not!" the principal exclaimed, "I'm married, Chelsea. Actually, I already have 3 grandchildren." I quickly turned away and blushed. Shocks. This is so embarrassing. "S-sorry." I mumbled. The principal snickered. "It's okay, Chelsea. What I was going the say is that you resemble my little sister. She cries too often because of heartbreaks. Seeing you makes me remember her." "Is that it?" I confirmed. The principal giggled. "Yes, that's all. No other feelings included." Suddenly, the principal stopped giggling. "I guess this is about Rick, no?" he asked directly. I slowly nodded. "We broke up." I whispered. The principal gasped. "But you just made up yesterday!" I frowned. "I know." "I'm so sorry to hear that." the principal mumbled. "It's okay," I gasped, fighting back tears, "I'm okay." The principal fell silent for a moment. I took a sip of the coffee when he suddenly spoke. "I have an idea!" the principal exclaimed. "Idea? For what?" I asked. "According to your teachers, you acquired high excellence in your studies, especially, in the field of arts. the principal said. I blushed slightly. "Well..." "I was just on the phone with the Board a while ago, and they said that they are offering scholarship for qualified students who excel in arts." the principal explained. "Scholarship?! For arts?! Gee, that's awesome! I'm in!" I exclaimed gleefully. "I'm glad you're interested. You won't regret it. It's a special school with high-class education. It will take about 4 years. All expenses paid!" the principal asked. "Wait a moment. Where's the school anyway?" I asked. "Oh, I forgot to tell you..." "It's here in New York, right?" I confirmed. The principal frowned. "Um, no." "Somewhere near?" I asked. My heart beating fast. "Nope." the principal shrugged. "Then where is it?" I asked. The principal smiled. "The art school is in... "... London."
Author's Note Chelsea was offered a scholarship in London! Will this really be the end of Chelsea and Rick's love story? So what do you think? Should Chelsea accept the scholarship or not? Opinions and feedbacks are highly appreciated.
Feedback (as you asked, hehe): I actually enjoyed this chapter a lot, but there were actually a few spelling mistakes Excused girlie Again, I love your authoring (is that even a word) and you have the best story on FF, in my opinion. I can't wait for the next update, and I love how Chelsea is ^so dramatic. I kind of miss the days when the updates were ^so long and you'd have 2 p.o.v's in each update. Not that I'm complaining Love the story!
ShepherdsPie: Thanks for the honest feedback! I hope to receive more opinions like that. I really want to improve. Well, actually, my mom's in the hospital, and it's quite hard for me to find time to update. So, please do understand.Once I find time, I'll make sure the updates are longer, I promise. Hope you didn't lose interest in this story.
I Agree with sheperd i liked it when there were two but you said u were hard pressed on time so one pov is enough for me. I think Chelsea should accept because it wont be the end I know exactly what Rick would do!! I Think you have the most amazing story on all FFs you are an excellent writer... Beyond excellent actually watever that is! Lol