Desperate

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Eliza02 (01), Nov 9, 2011.

  1. Rick...

    I'm lucky I'm not you 

    Anyway,

    :eek: :eek: :eek:
    Nash=TroubleMaker!
    Rick=바보.(Korean for stupid/fool)  With Nash and Adam around... *shakes head sadly* 
     
  2. Uhoh not a smart idea bump!
     
  3. Guys, just so you know, Start of Something Good by HollyS has been remade and she will be updating soon!
     
  4. bump!!!!! 







     
  5. Bump  update please !
     
  6. Rick puts himself on unnecessary positions. He could've just told Chelsea the truth from the beginning. If Chelsea weren't so dramatic, she would most certainly understand.

    …is it bad that I realized I don't really like the two main characters' personalities?

    I love this story, by the way. 
     
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  9. Momma  So true, but like I said, he's a 바보.  And he loves Chelsea SO much. 
     
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    Thanks to kim-ay for the inspiration <3 I could never have done a forum art this nice! Thanks for 'helping' me with the top part of the heart  감사합니다!
     
  11. Chelsea's point of view:

    Ugh.
    What was I thinking?
    Why did I even suggest that?

    Bring your brother along?
    That's it. I feel so stupid.
    I mean, 3 people in a date?
    This is the first date after our reconciliation. And I ruined it already.

    But I want to clarify something.
    I didn't invite Rick's brother to get to know him...
    It's just that...
    Rick and THAT MAN had the same surname.
    And a small voice inside my head is screaming that Rick can be related to... NO! I WON'T MENTION HIS NAME!

    I buried my face on my hands.
    No. I can't think this way.
    I have to stay positive.

    -The Next Day-

    Knock Knock

    "Come in!" I called out as I attached one hoop earring in my left ear.

    "Dear," my mom said as she opened the door, "Wow! You look fab!"

    I looked at the mirror.
    Well, I applied some light make-up. I also wore some jewelry to match my floral dress.

    "I still look the same. Boring. Plain. Ugly." I sighed.

    My mom stared at me.
    "No, you aren't ugly, Chelsea. You're beautiful," my mom smiled at me, "I thought you're going on a date with Rick today?"

    "I am, Mom. I have a date with Rick today." I smiled.

    My mom gave me the look.
    "Are you sure? Because you never wore make-up in your dates with Rick."

    My eyes widened.
    "We-well, I just want to look beautiful today..."

    What was I thinking?
    Why am I even applying make-up?
    Is it because there's a possibility that I'll meet... him?

    NO!
    Rick's the only one I love.

    Love?!
    Who mentioned "love" anyway?!

    Ugh.
    Forget it.

    "Mom, I'm going." I called out as I wore my Converse rubber shoes.

    "Rubber shoes? Are you serious?" my mom remarked sarcastically.

    I smiled.
    "There's no way I'll be wearing high heels."

    I rode a taxi to go to the restaurant.
    The journey was intense.

    For an unknown reason, my heart was beating fast.

    The taxi halted as we arrived at the destination.

    "Here I am." I mumbled as I got out off the taxi.

    I looked straight ahead.
    It's now or never.

    I awkwardly waked inside the restaurant and scanned the whole place.

    "Chelsea! Here!" Rick called out.

    I turned and saw Rick with another man beside him.

    "That must be his brother." I whispered nervously.

    The man's back was facing me so I can't really see his face.

    As I walked nearer and nearer, I noticed something.

    Suddenly, my heart jumped.

    Similar hairstyle...









    Similar built...









    Similar mannerisms...








    The mystery man slowly turned around and faced me...














    OH.MY.
    Someone. Please. Kill me now.
    It really is HIM!
     
  12. Is it Jake? Or is it... Adam? Find out in the next update of DESPERATE!
     
  13.  bump!!!! idk now I'm confused lol please update soon!!!!






     
  14. Please update soon! I skipped some of my revision to read this! :D