~Chapter 12~ "Lady Mishil! Shu has assassinated Princess Alida instead of Deokman!" Hajong,another one of Mishil's sons, rushed into Mishil's chambers. "Oh,really? Well,in any case,that's one member of the royal family down." Mishil smiled coolly and evilly. "Send Shu to accompany Chunchu back to Seorabol. It's best that Shu stays out of the way for now." Back in the temple,Yushin was trying to find a way to Mishil's chambers through the long and winding passageways. As he came across a fork in the path,he noticed footprints in the dirt. Knowing it must be the tunnel to Mishil's passageways,he turned left and continued down the path. Outside the cave,Deokman was staring blankly into a pond. I sat down next to her and let her pour her tears and grief out. Deep inside,I wished to be able to hug her and say that it was alright,but I restrained myself. I didn't want Deokman to hate me,even if it meant I couldn't show my affection towards her. --- -.-
If you focus on one then you'll learn from your mistakes. If you have two you make the same mistake twice. If you wanted to better your writing skills you'd do one. Lol. And if any of you are interested I'm making my own story
~Chapter 13~ "Princess Deokman! Chunchu has arrived at the palace!" Yushin reported. Deokman looked up with a smile and told Yushin to tell Chunchu to wait for her at Ingang Court. "I'm sorry,Princess,but Chunchu has gone out with Hajong already." Yushin said awkwardly. Deokman smiled and replied,"No problem. I will wait for him." Meanwhile,I was searching through my room for the maps Munno had left me. However,I could not find them. I immediately rushed off to find Yeomjong,the man who had helped Munno complete the maps. "Tell me where the maps are." I growled at Yeomjong,holding my sword to his throat. He replied nervously,"I gave it to the crown prince Chunchu already. He is the rightful owner. Not you!" Livid,I slashed his face with my sword,leaving a long wound across his right cheek. "You rascal!" I shouted and left for the gambling den,where I knew Chunchu and Hajong would be. "200!" "400!" The raucous men placed their bets on the number they chose. As the man rolled the dice,there was an unanimous sigh as Chunchu won yet again. I signalled to Chunchu and mouthed to him to meet me at the back of the gambling den. "What do you want?" Chunchu asked me with raised eyebrows. "Bring me to your room." I narrowed my eyes at him. Scared,he walked off to the inn and showed me his room. "Take those maps out,you rascal!" I glared at Chunchu as he fumbled around in his drawers for the book. Taking out a mess of folded papers and books,I advanced and held my blood-stained sword to his throat. "Unfold the papers and arrange them properly." I growled. He complied,trembling. An hour later,I walked back into the room and saw a neat pile of papers beside a sleeping Chunchu. I nudged him with my sword and asked suspiciously,"Are you sure they are in the correct order?" He nodded,and I flipped through the pages. Sure enough,they were in perfect order. I glanced at Chunchu and smirked,"So that rascal has a photographic memory." I took the maps and left. --- Long update. Bidam isn't scared of Chunchu,even though he's a crown prince.
Thank you for bumping! Here's an update! The next one will come 2-3 days later,on a weekend. --- ~Chapter 14~ "We must make Chunchu believe we are the good people." Mishil raised her eyebrow at Hajong. "I have heard that he met Bidam. How can you be so careless?" Hajong replied,"We can make use of Kira,the Divine Seer,to convince him." He smirked,"Besides,with a little distortion of facts and clever planning,we can make it seem like we know Heaven's will." The next day,in the village,Mishil and her followers strode into Ingang Court. In front of the royal family and the councillors,clouds of smoke billowed out of the ground. Slowly,a stone tablet rose out of the ground. Inscribed on it were Korean characters,which meant 'Once twins are born,the royal family's line of princes will cease.' Speaking loudly and confidently,Hajong said,"Do not deceive us,Your Majesty. We know Her Majesty has produced twins. The eldest being Princess Cheonmyeong." Widening his eyes,King Jinpyeong replied,"What nonsense are you uttering? We only have one daughter,who is Princess Cheonmyeong!" Suddenly,another cloud of smoke billowed out of the ground,right next to the original stone tablet. The Korean characters read,'Once twins are born,the royal family's line of princes will cease. The first of the Mizar twins returns to the sky. The second ascends the throne.' I appeared out of the smoke,boldly speaking to the King. "Hajong did not show you the full prophecy,Your Majesty. This is the full one. Princess Cheonmyeong is the first Mizar. Your second twin is the second." Shaking his head in disbelief,King Jinpyeong replied shakily,"I do not have a second daughter. Cheonmyeong was my only-" "No,Father. I am your daughter. The one you abandoned years ago." Deokman interrupted,appearing on a terrace next to Ingang Court. "I have returned." She added confidently,flanked by Alcheon and Yushin. Immediately,everyone turned to look at Deokman,gasping and whispering. I smirked at them,knowing that very soon,they would be either Deokman's followers,or Deokman's enemies. --- Exciting Kira bit in the next update(or the next next update!)