death note Fanfic

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Wing_Fanchu_Skullduggery (01), Apr 18, 2011.

  1. 8?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
     
  2. Wow. That's interesting Otto!  you had on dramatic life
     
  3. CHAPTER 1

    We were driving to Pennsylvania to my grandma's for my moms baby shower. I was in 6th grade. I was loving my life. We made our halfway stop at a hotel and started unpacking(just that mom wasn't feeling well, it's only a 10 hour drive). As my parents were unpacking, I made my way to the pool.(this part is made up btw) I practiced my swimming for a while, and then, A's I was trying to tan(cuz us Russians need our tan.) a notebook fell on me. I looked at it, taking off the sunglasses A's I did. It was a black notebook that said 'death note' on the front. I thought it was funny because I recently started reading a manga called death note just a few months back.
    'heh. So they already sell these. Time to talk my parents into getting me one...... If some1 claims this, that is.' I said smiling. '3..2..1.. Okay 10 seconds was enough.' I said A's I changed, and then made a run for it. What he didn't notice was that a creature was watching him...... Ryuk or Rem?
     
  4. Can I be a victim or something like that???
     
  5. Can I be the same in this story as ur other one
     
  6. I walked back to my hotel room, which was right next to my parents room. They always put me in a separate room so that they could have "alone time". I agreed. I still had breakfast and stuff with them, cuz they had a spare key to my room. I opened the door and put the chain on. I then walked over to the desk and turned on the lamp. I opened the death note. There was nothing written inside. I flipped to the back. There were at least 15 pages of rules. I looked at page 1
    And read:
    'if a name of a person is written in the notebook, that person will die. This is just like the manga. Heh, wonder if this actually works.' I said, turning on the tv. I looked for the local news channel. I found it and waited for someones full name to come on the screen. I found one name during a long interview. Looking at the second rule, which said 'if the cause of death is not specified, the victim dies of a heart attack' I wrote the name. Waited 40 seconds. The man clutched his heart and fell.
     
  7. That is pretty damn cool. Plz let me be in and don't kill me
     
  8. AWESOMENESS! I need that notebook :twisted: lol jkjk or am I?
     
  9. I will stop writing for now, focusing on your world.
     
  10. 'wh-what the?' I said, surprised. 'it works?'
    'yes it works, you dumbass.' said a voice behind me.
    I fell of my chair. Standing behind me was a monster that looked like-
    'R-Ryuk?' I asked amazed
    'how do you know me, kid?' asked the shinigami.
    'I read the manga. I especially liked your character in it. Are you really a shinigami?'
    'of course I am, stupid boy. How are you gonna live up to light's reputation?'
    'l-light yagami is real too?'
    'yes, you are the next generation. And light was real.'
    'was?'
    'I'm not gonna explain. Too long a story. Anyway, now that the Death Note picked you, what will you do?'
    'well first I'll rid my school of bullies and rival gangs. Then I'll get rid of anything that I deem A's injustice, like light did I s'pose.'
    'a worthy goal. Now gimme an apple.'
    'how did I know you'd say that?'
     
  11. Lol now gimme an apple




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