Dear Bestfriend,

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -KP-Calli, May 29, 2012.

  1. No, Cherry
     
  2. Aww they totally should be
     
  3. Like I would memorize a license plate…

    And I could hear screams of joy coming from the house, so Im pretty sure it was just another SUV from millions of people on earth. I unstrapped Torie and started walking up the long pavement driveway.

    Someone came out, and guided me inside. There were many people inside, and more outside. I sat Torie down in an area where other children her age were playing and laughing. Some must have been her cousins or second cousins.

    I went into the kitchen, I got a lemonade, right away I was gripped on my sides and looking over my shoulders to see Brian holding me. So I smiled at him.
    "Come meet my family. And get Torie."
    "Haha, okay. Come with."

    We walked over to the toddlers and tried to find Torie,"Where is she!?" I couldn't see her anywhere. I almost walked past Torie in frustration.

    Brian picked her up and I followed behind them as we came in sight of his grandparents. They were speaking in Spanish until they gave me hugs.

    "Hola, I'm Jose's grandmother. I've come to town to see my new members of the family!" I swear. Her accent was better then mine. I watched as she picked up Torie from Brian's arms and started holding her and talking to her. It was a little awkward…

    I turned around and saw a man walking in my direction. He picked his eyes off the ground and stared back at me. He was handsome… he wasn't Mexican like half the people here, buy he had dark eyes. I felt like I new him…

    He came closer and closer… my eyes never leaving his. His never leaving mine. He came so close, I could feel his skin close to mine. I didn't want to blink, I was afraid I'd lose sight of him. Then, he grabbed my arm. Slid it down till our hands meet. he had something in his hand…

    Brian finally noticed this stranger behind him. He shoved him hard and told him to leave. I just stood blankly at the crowd in front of me. Brian was asking if I was alright. I told him I was going to the bathroom to freshen up.

    I splashed cold water on my face, it trickled down my forehead to my shirt. I didn't want it to happen. But I could hardly see what was in front of me. I ran to the door and locked it. Then I fell to the floor and the flash-back started.

    Past

    Me and Brian got into another fight. A really stupid one. I was telling him a rumor I heard at school, about a girl sleeping witha ton of men. She was pregnant and she had know idea who got was the baby daddy. Her parents were mad and sent her to school covered in new and fresh bruises everyday.

    Brian started yelling at me to not make up horrible rumors. I'm pretty sure he saw her the other day with me. I was holding my belly, It was more of a struggle each day, I really hated how I couldn't walk normal.

    I started defending for my self, and he adventually told me to leave him alone. The way he said it made me fall apart inside. I waited till the bus got to my stop. I ran out and started walking home quickly. I made sure no one could hear me when I got home, I started crying into my pillow.

    my phone made a buzzing sound, and I went to check it.

    I'm so sorry babe.
    Another one…
    I was being stupid. My mom has just been pissing me off lately. I really am sorry.
    I was a sucker for a guy. But what he said hurtted me.
    Just leave me alone.
    I felt bad texting that. I didnt get a response and Lucy called.
    "Come up to my home. Now!" she hung up right away. I had no way of getting to her house while pregnant, so I recalled her, and her sister was coming to pick me up[/color]
     
  4. update!!!!!!!!!  it!!!!!!!! 









     
  5. I'll update one more. And take a break for 1 day!! The next ones exciting!!

    Sing x
     
  6. nothing exciting happened. She just wanted to show off her new bikinis and dress.

    I finally came home and saw that a note was tapped onto the front door, scrawled out in pink letters. Went out to eat for your cousins birthday. Be home late. -mom

    What ever. I'm sure there was an animal in my house that wouldn't mind hanging out with me. I did hear the doorbell ring and got up quickly as a pregnant person, could get up. It was Brian…

    "Baby don't leave me!"
    He was crying on my shoulder. He smelt like booze. I just patted him on the back and look into his glossy brown eyes.
    "I won't. I'll always need you. You'll be part of my life, and our daughters. Don't leave me!"
    We were both crying into each other. We finally stopped and he took my chin and started kissing me. It turned into making out, and I didn't enjoy this. I pushed him gently off me, but that didn't work. He started kissing me more and more, I was so worried. I would try to scream at him to stop, but he wouldn't let me. He finally stopped… but he told me to follow him into my room. I don't know why, but I did.

    He took off his shirt and yelled at me to take off mine. I didn't fell comfortable anymore. I was going to stop, when something made me shake all over. I saw, in his left pocket, the one that fell down to his thighs, there was a pocket knife. He noticed it too. We were both shocked when he pulled it out. I saw as he took a sharp knife out of it and started cutting into him self. I screamed at him to stop, and he told me what I had to do… so I slowly took off our clothing. Both of ours.

    He left before I could put on my clothes. I was crying so much. He made me promise not to tell anyone in the morning. Even himself. He started cutting himself again, until I agreed. Brian called me the next day telling me he had a major hangover and strange new cuts on him. I couldn't tell him, so I told my self. "You were rapped last night."

    No one knows. I never written it down. I met him again another night, the drunken Brian. He wasn't as bad. A lot of people liked him. But he didn't forgot about or incident. He would put his finger to his lip, and whisper "Shh," some people even asked me what he had meant. But I would shrug my shoulders and leave.

    I looked at my phone. "Crap!" I was in the bathroom for 20 minutes. I ran out so fast, I thought I knocked someone with the door.

    I got outside. I saw Torie but no Brian. I actually walked closer to her in order to see what she may be doing. Nothing… she was just looking cute and happy. I went back inside and ran down the hall to Brian's room.

    He was in there but it was really awkward what I walked into…

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    Woah! Well anyways, I still hope you don't mind that I use colors instead of fonts or whatever. I don't know how to, still.

    Sing x
     
  7. update!!!!!!!!! 












     
  8. There was some more people in the room. Brian's grandmother, and I believe his mother.

    They were talking… they shut up right away. It got extremely awkward with in 5 seconds. All eyes on me. "Hi." is all that came out.

    Brian got up and took me out of his room. He looked into my eyes and said four horrifying words to me "You need to leave…" my eyes were starting to water.

    I pushed away from him. Started down the hall an into the backyard. I searched for Torie and could see her. I turned around and saw she was right behind me. I asked the two couple, sharing her, if I could have her back. Her eyes were really puffy pink.

    Botches, I thought. I grabbed her and dodged everyone. I ran out to my car and buckled up Torie. She was crying but soon after I feed her a little snack and she fell asleep. I jumped into drivers seats and kept thinking about what happened.

    My phone went off. I ignored it. But when I finally pulled into the gas station, I dug around in my pocket, an found something else. It was a piece paper the stranger gave me.

    I read it. met me at the town square ice cream parlor tonight around 7 P.M.

    Well good god, it's freacking 6! I hurried out and arrived home in a flash. Parents were out in the living room…

    "Ahh, Sierra," my mother exclaimed,"Where did you go?"

    "Mom, I was out for an hour! I have somewhere to go later, will you watch Torie for me?" my father said he could. My mom just botched me out for 20 mins.

    I went into the kitchen and sat Torie down into her high chair. I started making some simple food for both use. Mac and Cheese? Peaches… my sister was in the room now. She grabbed a Juice Box and started sucking on it. "Those are for Torie! Stop drinking them! God damn, Annie!" I watched as she ran to her room and slammed the door.

    I was hard on her… but she knew she wasn't suppose to drink them. So I made dinner quickly and put Torie down for sleeping. I was a good mom…

    I got my car keys. I headed towards my vehicle when the flashback started.

    Past

    I stopped the van in front of Lucy's house. She ran out and of house and jumped in. She had tears all on her face, and Becca came out screaming. I started the car in reverse before Becca was able to say anything else.

    We stopped at a Chinese restaurant. Our stomachs were growling loud enough, we would reputably say "What?". It was a big restaurant in the small town. Looked like a full house…

    We walking in and immediately got to a nice booth. I touched my tummy and circled my hand around the baby bump. But I was only 3 months… I picked up a Menu. Started reading aloud the interesting choices. We ended up getting 'Crab Puffs, Orange Chicken, Pork Fried Rice, and Vegetables.' We both continued with waters and steaming hot tea.

    Our food came 20 minutes later. It was delicious. We laughed about everything. The people across from us with the spaz 5 year old. Boys, rumors, girls, celebrity's.

    I was looking towards the window when a man appeared. I didn't tell Lucy, she was facing the other end and chowing down on Orange Chicken. But, the man. He kept glaring at me. Finally a woman came up to him. They disturbingly started making out. But the whole time his eyes were still locked into mine.

    Lucy kicked me under the table. I looked at her in shock. I motioned with my eyes towards the window. She turned around but two people were already going there separate ways. Weird. Gorgeous man, odd woman. I tried to ignore it and me and Lucy talked about my pregnancy till the end of dinner. Which we split the bill.

    I was dropping Lucy off and turning around to go home. I was watching so carefully, when I took my eyes off the rode for a second, and then there he was…


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    Who thinks its the guy from the Chinese restaurant?

    Sing x

    P. S. I hate love stories.
     
  9. Hmm could be *scratches head*.
    BUMP!
     
  10. Thank you

    Sing x
     
  11. Omg. Orange works!
     
  12. I don't know how to do colours or bold or italics or making the words bigger how do you do it?
     




  13. You do those, and then when your done


    *It might not work*
     
  14. But how do you do it?
     
  15. Okay you do Hey there

    That's the color one.
     
  16. Omg. Look it up in the other ones. I'm about to die
     
  17. I'll PM U IT!