Dark Angels

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Poisonstar-ShockClan (01), Jun 27, 2011.

  1. Yea im weak in Fc and need someone to get Lich he is killin me like Spy did and now xxxJUniorxx has joined the war now its totally unfair , i need to win it this time , And the only way to do so is to outnumber Spy and her Gang but remember:

    I am On Spy's wanted list and one of the top hated by her and her gang along with my friend.
     
  2. Ya heavy I try not to think of it but its because my deal with her has expired after the cantina vanished suddenly
     
  3. When do I come in?
     
  4. You'll come in the next update wont update tonight though
     
  5. Srry i didnt update last nught will tonight though
     
  6. Can my character be very traditional in respect to the Angels? I want him to be like an Archangel, a sort of Elder of the Angels, of course, with a vast amount of power. Is that possible?
     
  7. Yea but when he first come in its like they have to find that out later , my parents will be out tonight for their wedding annerversery so I can update as much as I want tonight .
     
  8. Srry i forgot to update then but its july 4th weekend so i'll update now
     
  9. Chapter 6: Elder Angels

    Damien and Trystie were with us will we hung out , The war was almost over we were winning , It was custom to make friends with the enemy , As I am the leader . Second in comand is Tyrstie and our healer is Fletch ade is just a member of the group. Each of us are special in one or more ways. Adele has sharp sense, a power none of us have every seen. Fletch is a elder angel , one of the three powerful left. I well I have speed and stealth and sharp sense . Last but not least Trystie has fast flight. As for Luka her power is well No one is certain for sure. Our adversaries , lead by Sophie have specialties too. Sophie can speak to animals . The rest are unknown. Among us , Jasmine and Trixe are the ones I have forgotten. Trixe can use telepathy and Jasmine can use Telekinese , the power to move things with your mind.
     
  10. Chapter 7: New Arrivals

    As Trystie and I waited in the forest I saw something else , New Arrivals . Both were on our side , Being leader I told Trystie to go over and greet them. Natrually being a high rank , none higher than I she obeyed. Trystie said, " Hello , My name is Trystie , and you are ?"
    The other replied , " Daniel , but u can call me Danny " The other one next to Daniel replied , " Name is Azrilo " . Azrilo and Danny followed us to our base. Being leader I made Azrilo train in medicines and Daniel, being a mortal, was forced to do thibgs with Damien. The conversation started casually. " Greetings" Damien said , looking at Danny. " The same to you" Danny responded. " Whats your name" Damien asked Danny.
    " Daniel but u can call me Daniel , u r" Danny said. " Damien Rodgers" Damien replied. "Ok" Danny responded. The conversation was endless. At least we had more members. That is how Daniel and Azrilo came to be a part of our team, for good.
     
  11. This reminds me very much of the apocalyptic battle between heaven and hell

    Good VS evil

    Light VS dark

    Superman VS lex

    The list goes on.
     
  12. Thats kinda what i based this off of Eagle I thought that doing a story with battle Would be nice for a change make things a little more action packed and exciting.
     
  13. Yay

    The ultimate showdown
     
  14. To determine who rules good or evil
     
  15. Yea thats it the story line even after 7 chapters i bet no one could figure it out unless they carefully read the prologue and Chapter 1: see title on page 1
     
  16. Or read the bible
     
  17. Srry about Chapter 8 but it didnt post