Damsel NOT in Distress

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Whitemoon (01), Jul 13, 2011.

  1. It's friken funny!
     
  2. MOAR I command u
     
  3. New reader!!! Rlly funny!
     
  4. New reader!!! THIS IS HYSTERICAL!!!!

    I'm your number one fan!!
     
  5. I will make more soon, just having a busy day
     
  6. Thinking things out currently
     
  7. Sorry its taking forever
     
  8. Angel-It's okay. Take all the time you need.

    Devil-WTF IF YOU WANT US TO CONTINUE READING THEN UPDATE FASTER HOW CAN YOU NOT HAVE ANY IDEAS HOW LONG DOES IT TAKE TO UPDATE A STORY?!?!

    Me-Obviously I'm NOT on the Devil's side.

    Devil-Oh stfu

    Angel-*shakes head*
     
  9. MORE STORY
    Re-cap:Jeez just read the story.

    "And when were you going to tell me this?!" Electro asked, more wimpering then mad.

    "Eh, you were having fun. My nails need to be re-done. Any here have nail polish?" I asked.

    "In the cabinet near the window." Electro commented.

    Both Buff Guy and I gave him a look. It wasn't a "huh?" look, it was "why-do-you-have-nail-polish?!" irritated look. He sighed and told us, "Can't a man keep up with his appearence?!"

    I think Buff Guy and I have this thing where we can tell whatever the other person is thinking (telekenisis...telephenisis...whatever) because it was very obvious we were both thinking:
    Electro, you are barely a man.

    Anyways, something hit Electro and got him back on topic.
    "Vanessa?" He asked calmly.

    "Hmmmm?" I responded looking through the cabinet, only to find a lot of random colors like lime and froo-froo colors.

    "When were you going to tell me?! I thought you were an angel sent from Heaven or a fairy from my flower garden, here to stay with me..." He wandered off.

    "Oh man up, I made you feel better. Plus I got your lightning fixed." I told him.

    "Now if you don't mind me, I must be 'saved'." I excused myself.

    "Need a lift?" Buff Guy offered.

    "Nah, you'd creep my parents out." I responded.

    "You have parents?!" Buff Guy and Electro said in unison.

    "Yeah, they don't fit in with the story." I waved them good-bye and left.

    "YOU WILL HATE THIS DAY, VANESSA!!!" I head Electro yelling.

    Oh suuuuurrreee...
    END OF WHATEVER THIS PART IS
    Seven comments for me to work on another
     
  10. SORRY IT TOOK SO LONG!
    busy day .
    If you DONT want me posting on your wall please say!  all my readers.
    ,
    
     
  11. Plz continue it's great!
     
  12. CONTINUE!!

    Add me!
    Name : Viv.

    You can fit in the rest, lmao.

    And I hope Electro has a happy ending.
     
  13. 2 more good ones and I will write one tomorrow morning or afternoon
     
  14. This story is hilarous, a modern twist on old comics!
     
  15. I guess I'll be the 7th person  lol awesome story