It's not bad really. I feel like the rhyme scheme was kind of forced though. It's okay for things not to always rhyme. Have you written anything free form?
Bruh, you don't even know me. Literally this is the first time I've seen you. You're pretty judgmental for someone who claims to be "unblinded"
I'm not even trying to be funny. I don't try, unless I'm flirting with a girl, or trying to make a traumatized guy cause of a critical thrust ctfd. Just turning my thoughts into words. Ps. If I disappear for like 1hr+ it means I probably got Adultnapped.