James crumpled under the pressure of the squeezing hands. "Sorry...Amanda...sorry," he spits up more blood "damn it!" James yells, blood dribbling down his mouth, and stuck in his throat. The hands let go of him. Lalo is on the Gargoyle's back with his gun to it's brain stem. "James..." Lalo pulls the trigger and blows the Gargoyle's brains out. It explodes out through it's empty eye sockets, leaving pink and grey brain matter all over the crumbled up ground. Lalo hops off and lands next to James's body, he notices something for the first time. What happened to Mr. Guzzmen's body? He looks around furiously searching hard. "Oh no...!" Lalo burst off into the direction where Killa is protecting Melly. "Sorry James!" He calls back. "Where is Melly?!" Mr. Guzzmen knees Killa in the stomach, he grabs her hair and slams her face down into the hood of a card, then he kicks her side knocking her down. She spits out some blood and looks at him through hateful eyes. "Aw lil female dog gettin mad?" He crouches down in front of her. "Don't worry my lil sweet, when I find her, I promise!" He crosses his heart. "Your death will be quick and very painful!" He chuckles and headbutts her, sending Killa sprawling across the pavement. "Get up and fight me girl." He stand up holding his golden shotgun to her face. "Get," he cocks his gun "Up." Killa slowly gets to her feet, only to be knocked down again to a swift kick to her face. "Get up!" Killa gets up again, but prepared this time. His foot comes at her face again, Killa's arms stretch out, grabs his foot and twist it. Breaking the ankle. She doesnt let go but pulls him toward her and slams her elbow down on his knee. She flips him up then sends a blow to his stomach. Mr. Guzzmen flies through the air, hitting cars along the way. "YOU GET UP!" Killa yells, wiping some blood on her cheek. "Melly its safe." "No its not," Melly's voice is trembling now. Killa took out her knives and brought them up in a trained Marine stance. "I'm ready for whatever now, dont worry." James's eyes open to a figure standing in front of him. "I'll...I'll kill you!" James yells weakly. The figures feat snap to attention and face him. "Don't move James," the voice sounded familiar "you need to rest up." James tried to look up but his neck was snapped into one place. "A...Amanda?" James asked in disbelief. Her face came into view and she smiled and kissed his lips lightly. "Yeah..." her smiled faded slowly, as another figure was approaching from behind. "What're you doing her?" He asked. The figure behind him stepped by his head. "Stay down little boy," a female voice said "let the girls handle this." James could make out a pair of black high top stilettos. The figure crouched down by him, she go into his eye range. A pretty girl she was. She touched his cheek softly "Poor thing, too bad your precious Amanda is working for me now!" She stood up and walked past James, Amanda followed. "Amanda..." James called to her, she stopped immediately. "Dont leave me again, please." His voice came out weak but full of sadness. Amanda stood there for a good, what felt like, 5 minutes. She walked off again, but tears dropped onto the ground. James laid his head on to the ground and began crying madly. Soon his pain became too much. His whole body shut down. No pulse. No brain activity whatsoever. James has died.
Probably one of my favorite parts of the story I wrote so far haha I feel good now Quasi(Dank) Thank You to my fans/readers, you guys keep me going! 5 or More Parts Until the end of D0L II, i dont know yet! We'll see.
"James wake up...." Pause. "Wake up James." James laid on a pitch black floor, his eyes blinked open and he woke up. He shot up. "What the hell?" He twisted his body to look around. "Where the hell am I?" "Limbo." "Wha...?" James looked around but only saw a small yellow light hover close by with a sea of black surrounding it. "James!" The yellow light pulsed brightly. Another familiar voice after another familiar voice. "Deano?" James got up. "Yep!" The light hovered closer. "What...what happened to you?" James looked at the light, then under it, then all around it. "Ya got no body man...." "Yeah...well ya know sometimes I like to be surrounded by darkness..." Deano chuckled. "Smart ass like always huh?" James laughed, then gave the light a small punch which sent it flying across the sea of black. "Ow! Idiot! I'm too small for you to be doing that!" Deano complained. "Aw you a fairy or somethin?" James poked it and felt a small hand slap his hand down. "No!......yes sorta but thats not the point!" Deano hovered away from James "Dude you need clothes..." "What?" James looked down and noticed he was naked. "Sorry i guess things without souls cant pass through to the world of the dead eh?" "Just imagine any clothing you want and it'll pop up." James thought for a quick second and come clothes popped up. "Lame!" Deano said. "What I like bein comfortable." James slipped on his boxers then put on some dark grey sweat pants. "So whats goin on?" James put on a white T-shirt and some socks. "Well...youre dead man..." Deano said simply. "I cant die, sorry" James waved his words off. "Actually you can, but you and all the other immortals have a personal Limbo." Deano slowly hovered closer to James when he was done dressing. "So I'm dead...but really dead and screwed over times 2, right?" "Sorta but in your personal Limbo you have options, seems like God or whoever that is up there controlling things likes your kind." Deano moved to the floor of the darkness. "Look you can either go back to Earth and continue living, or get judged right here and now," Deano paused, but let something go. "So im a VIP and all you people that can die are the players no one knows about like Michael Bibby?" "He's known, but i get what youre sayin, so yeah." James moved around in the darkness "So why are you here?" "I use to be your best friend, until i died, so I'm you escort/helper, atleast thats what i think, i was given all this info I'm telling you, i dont know how." Deano went silent. "So how do i go back to Earth?" James asked. "Just...rip a hole in the ground and leave." Deano said. James looked at the little ball of light. "Youre not tellin me somethin..." Deano's light lit up brightly. "What're you not tellin me?" Deano got up off the ground and drifted around. "Once you rip a hole in the ground i can escape too..." "Why can't i just bring you back with me, the legal way?" "Cuz i wanna piss off the idiot that put me in this dark void!" Deano laughed madly. James laughed too. "Ok lets go." James dug his fingers into the black abyss on the ground and spread his arms apart slowly ripping a hole. Light shined out of the tears blinding James. He kept ripping and tearing until light flooded him all over. Then there was nothing. Just waves of smooth yellow light all around him.
Melly was shaking in the car Killa had her in. Her brother wasnt dead yet, not even close to being injured. Melly was getting frustrated. Killa held up her knives, moonlight glistened her blades. She scanned the area with her eyes, using her sensory to help. "Killa!" Lalo called running past some cars. Killa's eyes shifted to his general direction. "Wheres James?" "He's down, but he's immortal so he cant die." Lalo let out deep breathes. "Tired?" Killa asked. Lalo nodded. "These new powers and running takes it all outta me...." Lalo straightened up. "Where's uh...Melly's big bro?" "I dont know..." Killa felt movement coming from their back. "Lalo company." Guzzmen slowly moves past some cars. "Ya really hurt my nuts ya know?" He put his hand on his crotch. "I think ya better make it feel better yeah?" He laughed and put on his best charming smile, for a very ugly man. Lalo stepped in front of Killa. "I'll take care of him." Killa tripped him from under his feet "Like hell you are, youre gonna go watch Melly I'll take care of this guy." She raised her knives in the air and crouched down a little. Lalo stood there then saw Melly, he headed in her direction but noticed that Killa gve him a stare, so he took a smooth right and walks into the opposite direction. "Hah! I'll just kill you then follow ya friend!" Guzzmen raised his gun. "Now get outta the way will ya love?" He fires a shot, Killa swung her arm down, the bullets bounced off of her knives and spread all over the ground in front of her. "Try again?" She asked and smiled. Guzzmen didnt smile back but instead was a dark frown. "Die ya wanch!" He burst off of the ground and started using every inch of him as a weapon. "Look Amanda!" Kellie smiled her face lighting up. "Youre friends just might die because of their hurt feelings!" Her mostly brown hair flowed with the wind. Amanda stood behind her, while Kellie sat on the roof of a car. "Oh! Looky! Your lover isnt dead!" Kellie felt a thought come from the air "Seems as though he's looking for you my love!" She laughed. "Just go to show how much he loves you eh?" Amanda ignored her every word until she brought up James. "Leave him alone Kellie." Amanda said darkly. "Oh doll i can have your lover anytime i want!" Kellie's smile widened. "Trust me he's a catch but he could out live me! And always look young...cant have that eh?" Kellie felt James's though come on stronger, but felt another thought come from his direction. "Oh damn, seems like Deano is out." She poked out her lips and made a pouty face. "Who's that?" Amanda asked truly concerned, but for James not Kellie. "He's the blue to my red the light to my dark, well in this case im light he's dark." Her blue eyes flashed as the moon light hit them. Her all white clothes, so perfectly clean, shown through allthe destruction. "Maybe I should take James...you would feel happier and he could be my little play toy whenever i get bored..." her smile turn devilish and she put her hand to her chin as if she was thinking and glanced at Amanda. "You better not Kellie!" Amanda stepped closer to her. "I'll rip your head off wherever you stand!" Kellie waved her in front of her "Dont worry, dont worry, I'm kidding, plus i didnt mean sexually, he'll just go out on very dangerous missions until his body gives out, oh and then he'll do it all over again!" She laughed so girly, but with a hint of evil. James stood up and helped Deano up. "This is what LA looks like now?" Deano glanced around at all the destruction. "Hah! Nah man just trouble." James said. "We need to find Amanda." "Your girlfriend right?" "Yeah..." James never actually thought of her as a girlfriend, he didnt like that title.
Guzzmen hit Lalo in the face, grabbed his shirt and threw him down on the ground "Hah! I win mate!" Guzzmen whooped, he picked up his foot and was about to stomp on Lalo's face until Lalo disappeared. He was behind Guzzmen with his invisible hands on his heart, he reappeared and crushed it "Nah, I win mate." Lalo mocked him as Guzzmen went limp. Kellie cheered "Nice job Lalo!!!!" She smiled then turned her attention to where Deano and James was coming from. "Welp seems like we have to go dear Amanda," She stood, grabbed Amanda's hand and went into a dark portal. Deano saw Kellie "Damn girl always causing havoc..." "What?" James asked. "That girl that was talking to you while you were dying." "Oh..." James looked around "She has Amanda!" He ran forward and looked around "Amanda!" He called. He couldnt find her. "She's gone James, Kellie took her away," Deano walked up to him. "What is she doin here anyways?!" James was frustrated. "To cause havoc" Deano said
OOO! GOT IT!! 0L 4 LIFE!! Yes I stole this from you Killa, somewhat XD