Crush On You

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by TheAndi, Oct 26, 2011.

  1. Bump bumpity boo moarr pls
     
  2. UPDATE IF YOU DON'T HOLLY'S TIGER TO EAT YOU!!! lol
     
  3. Referring to page 1:

    Hobos dont stammer
     
  4. Auhhhhhh dayuuuuummm love this storybump
     
  5. Sorry for the wait! I have finals today.  Update tonight! 
     
  6. My tiger is very hungry
     
  7. NUUU! -hides-
     
  8. Lolz I've missed you on my stories lol
     
  9. 

    CASSY's POV

    My head whipped around at the voice. I knew that voice.

    "G-Ginny?" I watched helplessly as Ginny pushed Her way through the crowd and ran straight to Carter, throwing her arms around him.

    She pulled away, and looked around, confusion drawn on her face at the sight of us.

    "Heeey?" her eyebrows knitted together.

    I heard Abi take in a sharp breath. She was the first one to fully comprehend what was going on.

    And boy, was she mad.

    "YOU SICK, B*STARD! YOU THREE TIMER! YOU-YOU-YOU THINK YOU CAN JUST SHOW YOUR FACE ? YOU A*S! YOU MANWH*RE!"Abi kept screaming, ignoring all the disapproving looks the onlookers were giving her.

    Carter streched his collar, "Abi...chill.."

    "NO I WILL NOT 'CHILL'!!" she screamed.

    "Abi! That's my CJ you're talking to!" Ginny said, still a bit puzzled.

    "Your CJ? He's my Carter!" Natalya stepped in the conversation.

    "He was all of ours! He-he was cheating on all of us!" Abi slapped her forehead, as if to say ' Duh '

    Realization dawned into their faces.

    "W-What?" Ginny mustered, "CJ...?"

    Carter bit his lip, "....as in Carter Joshua...."

    Ginny eyes widened and she started whacking Carter with her purse, "HOW...COULD...YOU...DO...THIS...TO....US....?!?!....YOU...JERK...!!!"

    Natalya marched up to him, and their eyes met before she raised her hand and slapped him--hard.

    The slap made such a loud loud sound that the priest even glanced their way.

    "That's what you get, *****." she hissed before walking away.

    Ginny started hitting him again and Abi yelled some more not-so-nice things.

    "Ginn-" I said before a hand pulle me roughly, breaking me away from the crowd.

    "Wha-Alexander?!" I turned to face the blond boy in shock.

    Our elevator moment came rushing back to me.

    FLASHBACK

    "Alex..uh...hey." I stammered when I saw him inside the elevator.

    "..hi..." he stepped forward and pressed the  button of the elevator, "Well, aren't you going to come in?" he smiled.

    I laughed, "Uh, yeah." I hesitated, then, deliberating once more, I finally just entered.

    The doors closed and we were alone. I pressed the number 33 on the dashboard. Dang, why does this hospital have to have so many floors?

    "So...what bring you here?" he said, kind-of-but-not-really killing the silence.

    "Um. Cameron, well, he, uh, got into an accident and, uh, well, he, passed." I looked down at my wet shoes.

    In a flash he was beside me, putting his arm around me, "Ohmygoodness, I'm so so so sorry."

    I wiped the surprising tears that spilled, "Thanks. How 'bout you? What're you doing here?"

    His arm dropped and I knew I had hit a nerve, "My sister got admitted cause of," he gulped, "..drug overdose."

    It was my turn to keep on apologizing, "Wow..I never knew."

    He looked up and met my eyes. For a moment, there was only silence, even the chugging of the elevator wasn't audible. We standing so close, my back against the elevator wall, him facing me.

    I knew it. This was the moment. My first kiss. This is it. He came closer..and closer...I closed my eyes...

    Ping!

    The elevator door opened. It was floor 33 now. The atmosphere changed and he pulled away. My eyes flung open and I saw him blushing.

    "I..should..go..." I said, stepping out of the elevator, sad that the moment had ended.

    Why did hospitals have to have so little floors?

    END OF FLASHBACK

    "Cassy..you shouldn't be in that mess." he said, looking into my eyes deeply.

    "Those are my friends." I hissed.

    "Yeah, but, well, I have something to do." he said, cupping my face.

    I gasped inwardly. Oh no..

    "We have unfinished business, m'lady." the corner of this mouth turned up.

    He came closer..













    And closer..










    And closer...














    And he kissed me..

















    And you know what?





















    It was perfect.

     THE END! 

    Yiiz, the end.

    (The "We have unfinished business" part is for Joyce1234 )

    And yiiz, the end.
    How'd dya like it?
    Yiiz, I will make a sequel. 
     
  10. HEYOOO!!

    IM FIRST WHICH MEANS I.AM.AWESOOOOME!!

    ANYWAYYYY SO YEAH WE HAVE UNFINISHED BUSINESS TO DO HAHAHAH LOL!

    THAT SOUNDS WEIRD SO IMMA JUST BUMP THIS THREAD
     
  11. BUMP  yeay a sequel
     
  12. pure awesomeness!
     
  13. I loved this story!!!!
    And there is going to be a sequel can't wait