Crush On You

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by TheAndi, Oct 26, 2011.

  1. Hey, would you mind adding one character as a special exception? Lol I've always wanted to be a character in one of these, and this story is riveting. :D
     
  2. Andi you need to update!!! Or face the wrath of.....MY TIGER!!!
    GRRRRR
     
  3. NOT THE TIGER! I got meh  and my ! Rawr.

    Okay, okay, I'll update tonight. 
     
  4. Yayness!!!!!!!!
    Tiger shall not maul your face
    purrrrrr lol
     
  5. Here's that update you've all been threatening me for! (that means you, Holly. )

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    CASSY's POV

    "We now reap for the death of Cameron David, he will be missed. A moment of silence please." the minister lowered his head, and the people did the same.

    I needed more than a moment. I walked away from the crowd, not wanting to be seen, I just needed to be alone.

    "Cassy.." a voice said. I turned. It was Abi. I knew we were still in that kinda-fight because of Brittany, but I didn't care. I ran over and enveloped her in a hug, and the tears finally came.

    "I-I-I...am so..so..so..s-sorry for before..." I hicupped.

    Abi hugged me back, "It's okay." she sniffed, crying for like the second time in her life.

    I heard click-clacking noises confront us, and we pulled away to see Brittany with Natalya.

    I narrowed my eyes, "Hel- lo " I said suspiciously.

    Brittany raised both hands, "I come in peace. Just want to say..." she took a breath, "I'm sorry."

    Abi and I shared a look.

    "I'm sorry too." Natalya said quickly.

    Abi opened her mouth to answer, I'm not sure if she was going to forgive them or not, when a bell sounded. They were going to lower Cameron's casket.

    We all knew what was happening, we slowly bent our heads down and walked back to the funeral.

    I heard Abi gasp beside me, "CARTER!" I heard the running of footsteps and saw Abi rush to Carter, giving him a tight hug. Carter's eyes were puffy, and he was holding a small hankerchief.

    I felt a pang. He look so, so much like Cameron. I missed him.

    What about Alexander? The elevator...? But I didn't want to think of that right now.

    "WHAT?!" I whipped my head around in time to see Natalya run to the couple and spin Abi's arm of Carter.

    "EXCUSE ME, HE'S MINE." Natalya snapped.

    Abi looked shock for a moment, almost to stunned to speak. But Abi never stay speechless for long.

    "WHAT DID YOU SAY? HE'S MY BOYFRIEND." Abi retorted.

    Natayla scoffed, "Who do you think you are, gurl? He gave me this!" she thrusted out her right hand, where a ring was wrapped around her finger. Upon furthur inspection, I saw that it had the ingraving I love you around the band.

    Abi blinked, "T-Then, what's this?" she thrusted out her own hand, where a similar ring was displayed. Abi just looked confused now.

    Both Abi and Nattie turned to Carter at the same time, "So? You were cheating on us?" Natalya snapped.

    Carter laughed shakily, holding up his hands, "Girls..girls.."

    Abi slapped him, "YOU TWO-TIMER!" YOU UNSPEAKABLE CAD! YOU-YOU-YOU-"

    She was interupted by a high-pitch scream...








































    "CJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

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    Interesting twist. 
     
  6. Who is cj??
    Bummmmmp!!
     
  7. Page  
     
  8. Can you make it longer? I want the longest one
     
  9. HEYOOO GURLFRIEND!!!

    LONG TIME NO SEE ON PIMD although I do see you like EVERYDAY!

    ANYWAY!!! OHEMGEEE SOOOO AWESOME AN LEGENDARY!!!


    PLEASE BUMP!!

    AND EXPLAIN TO ME ON MONDAY!
     
  10. I just spent 2 hours reading this story from the beginning and I just want to say.. I love you  this story I incredible.

    BUUMMMPPPPPP
     
  11. BUMP.! Please omgee, i read this whole thing im addicted to it, please continually update im obsessed your amazinnng
     
  12. I didn't threaten per-say lol I just used my cunning mind skills to manipulate you into updating.
    Yeah I went there.
    Bump!! :D
     
  13. Holly, its per se. Lol Anyways, BUMP!!!
     
  14. Lol my phone messed up lol sorry