Lol. Anyways... my next chapter is maybe tomorrow, but I'm honna do Rya's story now with my con writer RyaRayne.... so see ya guys!
Just a tip guys, work on your paragraphs a bit more, after a while when I'm reading I just see black squiggles, so if need be, have a look at other stories to see how you can break it up a bit.
Chapter 12 I blinked at him. Lance wanted me as his girlfriend? Oh my God! Oh my God! The blood rushing to my brain was too much. I swear I'm going to faint. "Lance... I don't know...." I said slowly. He just smiled at me and stroked my cheek with his thumb. Oh please stop doing that... Or don't. GOD! My head is a mess. "Please Mel..." he said in the most sweetest way. I wanted to melt so bad. I really do like him... Maybe... Maybe... "Okay..." the word was out of my lips before I could even stop it. He smiled and kissed me again. Oh God! This is amazing! I pulled back and looked at him. My cheeks extremely pink. "We can't let my dad know," I told him, "He'll get upset." "Don't worry Mel," he said stroking my cheek, "I will make sure he doesn't know. Not until you are ready." I smiled at him fand hugged him. I can't believe I have a boyfriend now. And it's Mr. Sexiness. Oh God. I'm in heaven. He let me go and took hold of my hand. He held it to his lips and looked me in the eyes. "Until I see you again my sweet," he said kissing my knuckles. I blushed brightly. How can he be so charmimg?! He smiled at me before releasing my hand and kissing my cheek before leaving. I could still feel the tingle of his kisses on my lips and knuckles. I felt giddy with happiness. I wanted to skip to the gates, but kept my cool and acted as if nothing had happened, but how can I? Lance Mason is my boyfriend! I grinned as I neared the gate. I stopped when I saw my dad's SUV. I remained calm as I got into the passenger seat and buckled up. "Someone looks happy," he said as he drove off. "How do you know?" I asked completely freaked out. "Your eyes gave you away. They look happy and shiny." I grinned at that. Since I was little, my dad has always been able to tell if I was happy or sad by the look of my eyes. "I am daddy." "Why is that sweetie?" I thought of something quick to say, so I wouldn't tell him about Lance. "Study time was fun," I said smiling, and as usual, Peter makes amazing meals. It was delicious! " He laughed. "Anyways, who was the young man that came out before you?" "That was Lance," I said calmly, "he's a classmate. " "Really?" he said quietly. Way too quietly. I looked at him trying to assess his expression, but I couldn't. He doesn't even have a face! We remained quiet for the rest of the ride home. I wasn't sure if my dad was okay or if he was angry. I mean, it's not like he's psychic right? Monday morning had arrived. As usual, my routine was the same, expect for the surprise I got. Lance came up behind me and kissed my cheek. I smiled and looked at him. He smiled at me, but had a look that said something wasn't right. "Lance... Are you okay? " I asked. "Me? I'm fine," he said a little too cheery, "fine. Fine. Fine." Something was definitely wrong. Same time, Rya walked up to us. I turned on her and pulled her aside. She must've said something to him. "What?" she asked calmly. "What did you tell Lance?" I almost growled. "What are you talking about?" "You said something to him didn't you." "What do you mean?" "Don't play dumb. You must've known that Lance and I are dating now." Her eyes widened as she turned hostile. "WHAT?!" she growled out. I gulped. She didn't know. "I...I.. I thought you knew..." I said quietly, clearly scared of her. "I DIDN'T! !!" she shrieked at me. I cowered as she yelled at me. She saw this and eased up, but remained cold. "If I had known, I would have told you but I didn't and if you had told me the very next day, I would be happy for you, but instead you accused me," she sneered at me. "Rya..." I started to apologize, but she stopped me. "I don't want to hear your lame ass excuse, much less your apology, " she said coldly, "I am appalled you think of me that way." "But..." "Save it! From now on, we are not friends Melody Jackson. We are through." She turned on heel and walked away, leaving me stunned and in tears. Lance came up to me and hugged me. I cried even more when he did, because.... I just lost my very best friend.
Well ladies and... whatever gents there are, that is the end of Rya and Melody's friendship. Now its up to you to decide if they should make up or remain as they are. Comment or pm me what you think
her dad is really slender man?! I just made my words bigger so you can notice me I like attention I just love it