Crash Landing

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *EpicFire15 (01), Mar 20, 2011.

  1. Lol where did I go?!?! 
     
  2. Torn and Fletch had stopped off in a small town, and were in a local market.

    "Were gonna need food, water... What else?" Fletch wondered.
    "How about uuum...hhmmmm... Oh I give up!" Torn said.

    When out of nowhere a man dressed in complete black jumped off a building and shot fletch and tried to shoot torn, but ran out of bullets before the shot. Torn walked up to the assailant and kneed him in the stomach, winding him then knocking him over. Torn then somehow carried fletch away and hid behind a house to examine the wound, the bullet had gone straight into his upper leg.

    Torn looked around desperately for help, then he saw it...

    A helicopter, sat on a heli-pad no one near it... He carried fletch to the helicopter and somehow lifted him into it, then climbed in himself.

    Just as he was becoming airborne a guard shouted: "They're stealin' a choppa'!" Witch set off what seemed like the entire town, several other helicopters were starting up, do torn flew the heli-copter away...
     
  3. Sarah stared up at the vast night sky above but only to see a helicopter getting shot at by several others... Sarah hates violence, she thinks it's unnessasary. She couldn't bare to watch any longer so she ripped her eyes away from the violence above. She looks at a flowerbed for a while before hearing a loud explosion, her head snapped upwards, now the fleeing helicopter was falling down toward the earth. Sarah watched in horror as the ball of fire descended from the sky...

    Meanwhile...

    "WE'VE BEEN HIT!" Torn shouted
    "Were goin' down fletch!... Fletch? Fletch?! Crap..."

    The helicopter was falling, fast. Torn couldn't stop it. He was pretty sure no one on the ground could or would stop the falling helicopter...

    When he crashed Torn had smashed through the steel walls encasing Stewie and Sophie.

    "Oh my god!" Sophie shouted.
    "What the hell?!" Stewie exclaimed.

    The burning helicopter had made impact and broke apart, Sophie could see her dad, torn lying, wounded in the flames.
    "Dad! Dad! Can you hear me?!" Sophie was desperately trying to break the harness tying her to Stewie. But they were too strong...

    Otto had put his plan into action, he cut off the power supply to the entire world. Nothing mechanical would work. He even prevented himself from completing his evil scheme.

    Dan was staring in awe at the helicopter that had just crash landed into the building of steel, he ran over to see if there were any casualties, he saw Torn, then he saw his brother Fletch lying in the fire.

    Dan dived in, regardless of the heat and dragged fletch out...

    Sophie had broken free of the restraints when the power deactivated. Stewie aswell. She ran straight at Torn and tried to pull him out but couldn't do it alone, Stewie geared his feet and lifted him with Sophie and carried him out of the fire...
     
  4. It might be to late but can I be in it?
     
  5. Awesome
     
  6. Charlie I'll try my best
     
  7. Thanks dude
     
  8. Just give me ur name for story and a couple of words describing yourself
     
  9. Bliz...
    Awesome
    Ninja
    Smart
     
  10. Charlie
    Shy
    Strong
    Tall
    Tan
    Flirty
     
  11. Hah ya that's how I describe myself
     
  12. I wanna be in it.... 
     
  13. Torn and Fletch were in serious pain, and being treated at the local hospital. Things were looking grim...

    Sophie now feared for her dad's life and was silently sobbing next to Torn's hospital bed, while he was asleep... Would Torn wake up this time?

    Dan was also in a similar state, just trying not to show it. A friend of Fletch's entered the medical ward. Dan greeted her "oh, hi Tay..." Tay stayed silent for a minute before speaking, "hi dan."

    "Hey there beautiful when do you get out of here?" Charlie was a massive flirt. "As if I'd want you, I'm married!" the random woman said. "Told you it wouldn't work!" Bliz teased.
    "Shut up Bliz, as if you ever got any girls!" Charlie said. "I've had more girls than you Charlie!" Bliz shot back, charlie felt angry but defeated.

    Torn was fighting for his life, in his head. All of his body was in critical condition. The first thing he needed was to open his eyes. Nothing, still black.
     
  14. Who am i married too?!?! 
     
  15. Your not that was a random woman your Tay 