Crash Landing

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *EpicFire15 (01), Mar 20, 2011.

  1. ILL TEAR HIM APART
     
  2. Note, there is only so much a handi-capped Torn can do! Keep it on plot if possible! Thanks! 
     
  3. ILL TEAR HIM UP
     
  4. Apoc, Torn is in crutches!
     
  5. ILL SHOOT HIM UP
     
  6. So far the most popular request is: Torn attempts to attack Bliz! Any more suggestions?
     
  7. U got remember u gave me anger issues so negotiating won't be a reasonable action 
     
  8. But Sophie is capable of lashing out aswell!
     
  9. Intresting... Id like to see sophie like scream and atack blizz
     
  10. ILL DO A COMBO!!
     
  11. Torn was pissed, his only daughter, taken from him... Why me? He thought. "F*cking son of a b*tch!" Is what he said. He lashed out with his crutches, his legs wrenched with pain but he didn't care, he wanted his family back, NOW.

    He hit Bliz square in the leg with the first swing. Bliz pushed Sophie away and hit Torn in the face, he winced in pain: Bliz is strong.

    He took another swing at Bliz and hit him in the stomach, winding Bliz.

    Bliz collapsed and gasped for breath. He pulled out a gun, and shot Torn in the foot, the pain was unbearable. Torn in turn collapsed.

    Sophie meanwhile was watching this unfold in front of her, Bliz was trying to het up now.

    She snuck up behind Bliz, and strangled him, Bliz lifted his gun. Sophie realised she needed to end this now.

    She violently jerked Bliz's next sidewards, his arm fell limp. She let go in horror, only just noticing that she had killed him.

    She had just killed a man, she felt horrible. She didn't like this feeling, not one bit...
     
  12. Murderer.........
     
  13. Holy f***k she killed a person 
     
  14. Sophie was in a state of shock, horror, and confusion... She didn't know what to do.

    Tay was walking toward the park as she had herd a gunshot, and she wanted to find the source...

    When she arrived her face turned pale, she screamed.
    On the floor lay a bleeding Torn, Bliz's corpse, and Sophie sobbing to herself.

    "What happened?!" Tay asked
    No response. Sophie said nothing, she just looked up at Tay. She was in tears, Tay knew something serious had happened.
    "Is Torn alive?"
    Sophie shrugged and Tay looked at Torn. Then saw the bullet wound. The end of the bullet was sticking out of Torn's foot. She winced, but pulled the bullet out, then threw it away as fast as she could.

    "We can't do much here... Help me carry him back to my place, okay?" Tay said

    Sophie nodded again, then picked up Torn's legs, Tay had his arms.

    "ooww..." Torn moaned
    Tay gasped a sigh of relief.