CONTEST Craft Your Own Vegas Mystery!

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  1. I like this one , good job love .....

     
  2. In upside Las Vegas, settled in the very heart is The Ritzy. Known for its grandeur and its entry exclusivity, this place is also where a certain mafia secretly hide their smuggled goods.

    Tonight is a very crucial one for the mafia. The Italian ships are stationed at California Bay, unloading their cargo. Someone was to be sent to The Ritzy and get the payment. The only hindrance to this major deal was the police.

    A sweet fragrance floated around The Ritzy as the infamous Flirtatious Flapper walked over to the man shooting darts in the far corner.

    “Enjoying the show, mister?” the Flapper asks, gesturing to the dancing Shimmering Showgirl.

    “Now now, mio amore, I’m not here to play,” the Amiable Mobster replies, missing the red circle.

    “But you are playing,” the Flapper huffs in frustration.

    “It will take place tonight when both, no three sides are oblivious to an attack.”

    Then the Flapper leans in to whisper, “The vault is at the bottom shelf, do not forget.”

    The Mobster throws his fourth dart and hits bullseye.

    The Flapper then sashays away and flirts with the Stunning Showman, running her finger all over his chest.

    Minutes pass and nearly an hour had passed when gunshots were heard.

    Headlines were plastered all over Las Vegas about the raid that happened last Thursday night. Everyone in The Ritzy and Italian mafia men were dead, and “rebels” from the mafia had taken all of the money and shipments.
     
  3. "Where are you going?," the Amiable Mobster, who was not scheduled to be home, spun his chair around to meet the eyes of his beloved. The flirtatious flapper quickly gathered her composure and made her way towards her husband, cautiously wrapping her arms around the neck of her husband.

    "The ladies and I planned to visit the new jazz bar downtown, Century Hall. I was just about to go meet them," she spoke, her voice saccharine.

    The man allowed her to go but he was no idiot. After a clear sign that his lady had gone, he made a call in utmost secrecy.

    "You know what to do."
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    "Wake her up," a voice commanded.

    A bucket of water was thrown at the flirtatious flapper who now sits bound to a chair, her eyes widened with horror as her husband sat across the desk, between them was a display of pictures collected from the past month. One picture had her pearls dangled around the neck of a Stunning Showman while she sat comfortably in his lap, their fingers entwined and face close.

    "How?" She croaked, her voice shaking as tears streamed down her face.

    "Nobody has ever betrayed me and survive except you, my love," the mobster explained, leaning across the table to stroke his wife's tear stained face, meanwhile his subordinate enters.

    "Please..." She pleaded as she shook her head, as if to tell her husband to give her another chance.

    "Too late."

    The shimmering showgirl pulls the trigger.
     
  4. The Amiable mobster walks into the pimd casino after finishing a job the waitress walks over and takes his order.. when the waitress leaves the mobsters table. The mobster noticed a beautiful woman. She was the star of the casino the simmering show girl. The mobster offer her a drink and they starting talking for hours. Later that night the showgirl noticed the mobster had a envelope in his jacket pocket. The showgirl went to start the show and she told her friend and told her about the package .. they drum up a plan to take the package.. after the show had ended the showgirl made her way back to the mobster and started giving him a lap dance once she was almost finished she leant in for a kiss and took the package in her left hand and passed it to the flirting flapper. She then passed it off to showgirls brother the stunning showman. Will they find out what's in the package before the mobster finds out it's missing?
     
  5. *evening 7pm*
    “I love you”, says the flapper. “I love you too”, the showman responds. The showgirl peers around the corner and spots them. She cringes in disgust. ‘Why can’t showman see he belongs with me instead of her?’ She asks herself.

    Meanwhile, the mobster returns back to town in his black car. He left for last year, no one knows why. The only thing people know is that the day right before mobster left, showman and him had a fight. The last thing he said before he left was, “I WILL get my revenge on you...”

    *midnight*
    A scream is heard. People rush to where the sound came from and the flapper is found dead on the floor.

    Later that night (or technically morning), the police have two prime suspects: was it the showgirl who was jealous of the flapper? Or was it the mobsters long-awaited revenge on the showman?
     
  6. FOR THE LOVE OF A SISTER


    Rain and gunfire fell as The Amiable Mobster dove for cover. He looked toward his sister, The Flirtatious Flapper, tied to a chair, terror etched across her face. A man stood holding a gun to her temple.
    He never wanted this life for her. But this time, just this once, it wasnt his fault.
    "I'm sorry I caused this. I never meant for her to get hurt." The Shimmering Showgirl sat crouched beside him. A gun was shaking in her hand, as tears poured down her face. "I didn't realize how crazy he was."
    The man holding the gun was her boss, The Stunning Showman. He became enraged when she turned him down for another, her love, The Flirtatious Flapper.
    "We will save her." The Amiable Mobster grabbed her hand. "I'll draw his fire, you shoot the minute you see an opening."
    Before she could respond, he dove out of hiding, popping shot after shot. The Showman returned fire.
    Just as the Mobster went for cover, a burning hot pain speared through his chest,red liquid began to spread. The last he saw, a bullet tearing through the Showmans skull.
    At least she's safe, was his final thought, before darkness took him.
     
  7. [RED] WARNING some contents may not be appropriate for ages under 13. There are SPG scenes. [/Red]


    Flapper had a huge crush on mobster. However, she saw Mobster kissing another woman across the bar, which she hurriedly identified by her headress that was brimming with grandeur. It was Shimmering Showgirl. She witnessed the intensity of their kiss and how the woman became more energetic every time the kissing became even more fierce. Out of jealousy, Flapper grabbed Showgirl's hair and pulled her out of the bar. Mobster tried stopping her, but Flapper was way too strong that she was able to pull off Showgirl's hair. Flapper has frozen as she stared at her hand filled with showgirl's ample strands of hair. When she had the courage, she looked up and saw Showgirl sprawled out on the concrete and unresponsive. Staring at Showgirl's eyes felt like staring into the nothingness and Flapper felt uneasy when she suddenly noticed the dark liquid running down her head that came from her sinful hands. Flapper was scared, her thoughts were running wild. Flapper thought she killed Showgirl, her eyes turned to Mobster, who didn't look like he was scared of the situation. Instead of calling for emergency, Mobster simply went to Showgirl and kissed her. The once empty and dark-eyed Showgirl suddenly lit up, her face gaining color, as if she was a lightbulb turned on. Mobster and Showgirl stood up and Flapper was confused as to why Showgirl seemed fine.when there was inhumane blood all over her that in a split of a second she was healed like nothing happened. Flapper's eyes are emotionless as she gets into Mobster's car, in there she saw a booklet with the title "Human Android"
     
  8. WARNING some contents may not be appropriate for ages under 13. There are SPG scenes.


    Flapper had a huge crush on mobster. However, she saw Mobster kissing another woman across the bar, which she hurriedly identified by her headress that was brimming with grandeur. It was Shimmering Showgirl. She witnessed the intensity of their kiss and how the woman became more energetic every time the kissing became even more fierce. Out of jealousy, Flapper grabbed Showgirl's hair and pulled her out of the bar. Mobster tried stopping her, but Flapper was way too strong that she was able to pull off Showgirl's hair. Flapper has frozen as she stared at her hand filled with showgirl's ample strands of hair. When she had the courage, she looked up and saw Showgirl sprawled out on the concrete and unresponsive. Staring at Showgirl's eyes felt like staring into the nothingness and Flapper felt uneasy when she suddenly noticed the dark liquid running down her head that came from her sinful hands. Flapper was scared, her thoughts were running wild. Flapper thought she killed Showgirl, her eyes turned to Mobster, who didn't look like he was scared of the situation. Instead of calling for emergency, Mobster simply went to Showgirl and kissed her. The once empty and dark-eyed Showgirl suddenly lit up, her face gaining color, as if she was a lightbulb turned on. Mobster and Showgirl stood up and Flapper was confused as to why Showgirl seemed fine.when there was inhumane blood all over her that in a split of a second she was healed like nothing happened. Flapper's eyes are emotionless as she gets into Mobster's car, in there she saw a booklet with the title "Human Android"[/quote]
     
  9. WARNING some contents may not be appropriate for ages under 13. There are SPG scenes.



    Flapper had a huge crush on mobster. However, she saw Mobster kissing another woman across the bar, which she hurriedly identified by her headress that was brimming with grandeur. It was Shimmering Showgirl. She witnessed the intensity of their kiss and how the woman became more energetic every time the kissing became even more fierce. Out of jealousy, Flapper grabbed Showgirl's hair and pulled her out of the bar. Mobster tried stopping her, but Flapper was way too strong that she was able to pull off Showgirl's hair. Flapper has frozen as she stared at her hand filled with showgirl's ample strands of hair. When she had the courage, she looked up and saw Showgirl sprawled out on the concrete and unresponsive. Staring at Showgirl's eyes felt like staring into the nothingness and Flapper felt uneasy when she suddenly noticed the dark liquid running down her head that came from her sinful hands. Flapper was scared, her thoughts were running wild. Flapper thought she killed Showgirl, her eyes turned to Mobster, who didn't look like he was scared of the situation. Instead of calling for emergency, Mobster simply went to Showgirl and kissed her. The once empty and dark-eyed Showgirl suddenly lit up, her face gaining color, as if she was a lightbulb turned on. Mobster and Showgirl stood up and Flapper was confused as to why Showgirl seemed fine.when there was inhumane blood all over her that in a split of a second she was healed like nothing happened. Flapper's eyes are emotionless as she gets into Mobster's car, in there she saw a booklet with the title "Human Android"[/quote][/quote]
     
  10. WARNING some contents may not be appropriate for ages under 13. There are SPG scenes.



    Flapper had a huge crush on mobster. However, she saw Mobster kissing another woman across the bar, which she hurriedly identified by her headress that was brimming with grandeur. It was Shimmering Showgirl. She witnessed the intensity of their kiss and how the woman became more energetic every time the kissing became even more fierce. Out of jealousy, Flapper grabbed Showgirl's hair and pulled her out of the bar. Mobster tried stopping her, but Flapper was way too strong that she was able to pull off Showgirl's hair. Flapper has frozen as she stared at her hand filled with showgirl's ample strands of hair. When she had the courage, she looked up and saw Showgirl sprawled out on the concrete and unresponsive. Staring at Showgirl's eyes felt like staring into the nothingness and Flapper felt uneasy when she suddenly noticed the dark liquid running down her head that came from her sinful hands. Flapper was scared, her thoughts were running wild. Flapper thought she killed Showgirl, her eyes turned to Mobster, who didn't look like he was scared of the situation. Instead of calling for emergency, Mobster simply went to Showgirl and kissed her. The once empty and dark-eyed Showgirl suddenly lit up, her face gaining color, as if she was a lightbulb turned on. Mobster and Showgirl stood up and Flapper was confused as to why Showgirl seemed fine.when there was inhumane blood all over her that in a split of a second she was healed like nothing happened. Flapper's eyes are emotionless as she gets into Mobster's car, in there she saw a booklet with the title "Human Android"
     
  11. WARNING some contents may not be appropriate for ages under 13. There are SPG scenes.
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    Flapper had a huge crush on mobster. However, she saw Mobster kissing another woman across the bar, which she hurriedly identified by her headress that was brimming with grandeur. It was Shimmering Showgirl. She witnessed the intensity of their kiss and how the woman became more energetic every time the kissing became even more fierce. Out of jealousy, Flapper grabbed Showgirl's hair and pulled her out of the bar. Mobster tried stopping her, but Flapper was way too strong that she was able to pull off Showgirl's hair. Flapper has frozen as she stared at her hand filled with showgirl's ample strands of hair. When she had the courage, she looked up and saw Showgirl sprawled out on the concrete and unresponsive. Staring at Showgirl's eyes felt like staring into the nothingness and Flapper felt uneasy when she suddenly noticed the dark liquid running down her head that came from her sinful hands. Flapper was scared, her thoughts were running wild. Flapper thought she killed Showgirl, her eyes turned to Mobster, who didn't look like he was scared of the situation. Instead of calling for emergency, Mobster simply went to Showgirl and kissed her. The once empty and dark-eyed Showgirl suddenly lit up, her face gaining color, as if she was a lightbulb turned on. Mobster and Showgirl stood up and Flapper was confused as to why Showgirl seemed fine.when there was inhumane blood all over her that in a split of a second she was healed like nothing happened. Flapper's eyes are emotionless as she gets into Mobster's car, in there she saw a booklet with the title "Human Android"
     
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    Flapper had a huge crush on mobster. However, she saw Mobster kissing another woman across the bar, which she hurriedly identified by her headress that was brimming with grandeur. It was Shimmering Showgirl. She witnessed the intensity of their kiss and how the woman became more energetic every time the kissing became even more fierce. Out of jealousy, Flapper grabbed Showgirl's hair and pulled her out of the bar. Mobster tried stopping her, but Flapper was way too strong that she was able to pull off Showgirl's hair. Flapper has frozen as she stared at her hand filled with showgirl's ample strands of hair. When she had the courage, she looked up and saw Showgirl sprawled out on the concrete and unresponsive. Staring at Showgirl's eyes felt like staring into the nothingness and Flapper felt uneasy when she suddenly noticed the dark liquid running down her head that came from her sinful hands. Flapper was scared, her thoughts were running wild. Flapper thought she killed Showgirl, her eyes turned to Mobster, who didn't look like he was scared of the situation. Instead of calling for emergency, Mobster simply went to Showgirl and kissed her. The once empty and dark-eyed Showgirl suddenly lit up, her face gaining color, as if she was a lightbulb turned on. Mobster and Showgirl stood up and Flapper was confused as to why Showgirl seemed fine.when there was inhumane blood all over her that in a split of a second she was healed like nothing happened. Flapper's eyes are emotionless as she gets into Mobster's car, in there she saw a booklet with the title "Human Android"[/quote]
     
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  14. Detective Ata, Amiable Mobster, Flirtatious Flapper and Stunning Showman all walk into Shimmering Showgirls luxurious room back stage. They find her laying face down dead.
    Detective Ata look at all three know one of them kill her. The Amiable Mobster was Shimmering Showgirls ex boyfriend. The Flirtatious Flapper hated the Shimmering Showgirl BC she stole her part in the show. And the Stunning Showman had a past that she knew who get him fired if it came out. There was a button in Shimmering hand that looks like it came off Amiable vest. A few feathers spread out around her throat could be from Stunning outfit. And a jeweled hand band that was personally made for Flirtatious laying on Shimmering table. But the Detective already know who the killer was. The killer was............................ Can't tell you BC what happens in Vegas Stays in Vegas..... 
     
  15. “Bump me on Line if he doesn’t take the juice and drips. I’ll call back. Tbh, I’m not sure whether the girl is coming back.”

    *“We all think not, and we think he know that she’s not coming.”*

    “How can she come? We know nothing of her. Even me. I told her in Line. About him in the hospital.”

    *“You don’t know her?”*

    “The next day, this shit happens. Darling, if I know, I would have talked sense into this girl. Or talked sense into the boy if the girl was playing his heart.”

    *“Well, she played him well.”*

    “You don’t say.”

    *“You think he know she is fake?”*

    “I think his brain knows but his heart denies it.”

    Eyes filled with pain, I looked at my phone screen with a heavy heart. His friend had messaged me a few days ago, concerned about his state of mind and health after he collapsed due to exhaustion. Somewhere out there, love have finally broken the amiable mobster. His eyes that were once full of hope, now looked void of emotion; and his usual, cheeky smile was no longer there.

    No one never really knew how he was faring since he hid it well. And all of this, was made worst by the disappearance of the shimmering showgirl. She had up and left and could not be contacted since. But, what she left behind was not only just a broken heart, but something more sinister that we could not have fathomed.
     
  16. Way back in the the shimmering showgirl past wasn't so shiny and glamorous. When she was younger and just starting out she had to do thinks unthinkable to rise to the top. No one really knows where she came from but everyone knows where she's going...
     
  17. Way back in the the shimmering showgirl's past wasn't always so shiny and glamorous. When she was younger and just starting out she had to do things unthinkable to rise to the top. No one really knows where she came from but everyone knows where she's going...
     
  18. -The flirtatious Flapper past-
    Before she became that she was a street vendor who always stay at flapper street , only few buy at her random things.
     
  19. -The flirtatious Flapper past-
    Before she became that she was a street vendor who always stay at flapper street , only few buy at her random things. until one day she saw a man killed someone, of course the man saw her and hired her to be a spy.


    sorry this sounds lame
     
  20. Vegas Baby, Vegas !!!

    21st December 1928

    The Stunning Showman thought about it all week and now he was on the run, he was stressed out and kept his tired eyes on the rear view mirror, they could get to him at any moment. He was on the way to Death Valley and realized that he couldn't leave his showgirl behind but did not want her to get involved in all this.

    He just can't live without her, he turned his green chebby around and headed back to the Flamingo. He then called the Flirtatious Flapper to help locate his showgirl, she was on stage so he asked to tell her to wait by the back entrance.

    The Stunning Showman arrived at the parking of the Flamingo drove around carefully to the back making sure no one could see him, the first thing that caught his attention was her terrified face, the Amiable Mobster was next to her holding a gun to her head

    Amiable Mobster :- " You really thought you would get away that easy !!! Where are my bentos showman ?

    Stunning Showman :- " It's in the trunk, i'm sorry, please don't hurt us just take it ! "

    The Mobster took back his Bentos from the Showman's green chebby and took them both to the desert. That night a couple of gunshots were heard in the Mojave desert, the Showman and his Showgirl were never seen again.

     
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