Clock's Ticking

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-Magical_Rani4- (01), Dec 14, 2012.

  1. Bump.


    In case no one realised, update is on le previous page. :3
     
  2. I noticed and I loved it! I want more!! <3
     
  3. I'll update tonight hopefully. 
     
  4. Sorry, I fell asleep early by accident. I got an awesome idea so working on update now :D but may get posted later, as I'm going to see The Hobbit.
     
  5. Can you please read my story, Broken?
     
  6. Can you not advertise your story here, please. .-.
     
  7. ???P.O.V

    I dropped down stealthily, my black beady eyes flitting around the small room. The girl was asleep. A smirk tugged at the corners of my mouth; that made my job easier.

    I crept towards her, wincing at the squelch of my boot lightly tapping the floor. Chloroform stained cloth in my left hand...Dagger in my right.

    I croutched down next to the girl, tucked away under her excuse of a desk. Her expression was pained.

    Ha! If she thought her dream was bad, wait till she wakes to reality!

    My sun kissed face bent down to hers, my lips grazing her ear. My left hand tightened. My lips parted slightly, letting out a soft growl.

    "Lights out my dear..."

    Her eyes opened suddenly, "wha-"

    Before she could cry out, I bought the cloth to her lips. I held my breath for a few moments.

    Thud!

    I let out a twisted laugh. Now to get to work...

    ***
    Purposely didn't describe him much. You can guess about his appearance.

    The next updates will be flashbacks Midnight's haveing. (due to being passed out) They will show her family and past.
     
  8. Bump.

    That update was small and not the best, so I'm going to write another one. ^-^ I'm in a writing mood. XD
     
  9. Yay!!! Bump love this story Rani <3
     
  10. I've never been unconscious, so probably got a bit un realistic. Tbh, I don't see how it would offend or bother anyone though.
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    (A/N: She's unconscious atm.)
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    My mind swam in an ocean of darkness. It was like I was searching...Searching for memories...Searching for the past.

    Flashback.

    Rain flew at the living room window, and thunder could be heard easily. Auntie sat watching TV on the posh leather sofa, unaware or uncaring of the shaking 8 year old...Me... watching out the wide window, scared.

    I looked at the rain wide eyed, "A-auntie make it stop!" I stuttered, my young self not used to the horrendous weather. I placed my hands over my ears, trying to foolishly block out the thunder.

    "Shut up, you ignorant brat! I'm trying to watch my programmes! No wonder your' Father was depressed...Having to deal with a whiny **** like you! Shut up," Auntie said in an irratated tone, not even looking away from the loud TV. She was to engrossed in her ridicolous programme to even give the little girl a second glance.

    I looked at the floor, and bit hard on my lip trying to keep a straight face. A small salty tear slipped from my eye. My face remained expressionless though, trying to show her words didn't hurt me.

    "I guess it was my fault...Sorry Auntie..Sorry D-daddy," I murmured, my voice cracking.

    Auntie didn't even turn her fake head, she just kept staring at the TV and twirling her long blonde hair, as if she didn't care.

    Flashback end. New flashback.

    A gappy grin spread across my face. I bounced up and down, like any other six year old would in my situation.

    I was at a carnival with my Daddy! He didn't usually take me out, but today he was in a good mood! I thought, anyway.

    He looked down at me, his shaggy black hair falling messily across his forehead. He was wearing a kind smile. "I have to nip to the loo, I'll be back in a minute," he said, smiling lightly.

    I returned his smile, not noticing the pained look in his eyes, or the fact that it seemed almost fake. I waited with a kind carnival lady for him to come back. A few moments later he re-appeared.

    We had fun the rest of the day. I even won at Ring toss! I always found something wierd though...

    It was hot and most people were wearing T-shirts...So why did Daddy look so hot and sweaty, yet not even roll his jacket sleeves up?

    Flashback end.

    My mind once again searched for new painful memories, to taint my pathetic state.

    ***
    Not the best update, but it's just to show her family life wasn't that great. :3
    Thanks for reading.
     
  11. Bump! Update soon! <3
     
  12. I'll update tomorrow.
     
  13. Yay! It's gonna be hard for me to wait for it though. :c
     
  14. Haha, sorry. But gotta get my beauty sleep.
     
  15. Hoping to get some of the older readers back soon. :3
    Didn't update for a while and now only a few of you still read. =\ XD