Still not feeling great and typing lots makes me feel worse. =/ Will update as quick as I can though. And just saying, the last update revealed something BIG to do with the killer...It'll become clear in the next update. :3
Small, but gives you an insight of the secret persons' mind. Not walling anyone because I'm lazy. :L **** ??? POV I checked the time on my granmothers' old watch, strapped loosely around my wrist. The time indicating 5 and a half hours remaining...A smirk spread accross my thin lips. Everything was going to plan; everything was fitting together perfectly. Nothing could go wrong... Nothing. If only I was a lucky kind of person. **** Incredibly short, but there wasn't meant to be an update till Christmas eve.
Great story. If I had to add some criticism, I would say add some short sentences. Not too many, because then it's choppy; just a few so it's more suspenseful. ^.^ Bump!