I can understand this, because the title of the thread is derogatory, as is the opening statement. OP, next time, rather than insulting the PimD community, you could write as though you are of the community since you're either staying or visiting our forums? Would make the whole touchy-touchy KaW vs. PimD thing a non-issue if people would quit bringing it up in their every thread.
You cannot bring class when you yourself have none of it. Pretty words don't make you classy. To keep this thread on track, as a courtesy, I will contribute. Alone From childhood's hour I have not been As others were -- I have not seen As others saw -- I could not bring My passions from a common spring -- From the same source I have not taken My sorrow -- I could not awaken My heart to joy at the same tone -- And all I lov'd -- I lov'd alone -- Then -- in my childhood -- in the dawn Of a most stormy life -- was drawn From ev'ry depth of good and ill The mystery which binds me still -- From the torrent, or the fountain -- From the red cliff of the mountain -- From the sun that 'round me roll'd In its autumn tint of gold -- From the lightning in the sky As it pass'd me flying by -- From the thunder, and the storm -- And the cloud that took the form (When the rest of Heaven was blue) Of a demon in my view -- - Edgar Allan Poe
I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity. Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night. We loved with a love that was more than love. -The Master of Horror: Edgar Allan Poe
Just passing through to read the comments. Op this was a lovely idea. But as wolf and art have said, please check that way you talk about the pimd community. As your current approach will not be received well and will likely result in derailed threads. Anyway as i said was stopping buy to see the quotes and poems. Some are beautiful
oh no someone insulted the pimd community and pimd!! however will I move on with lyfe? like plz don't insult pimd I'm like so sensitive.
Alright I'm back. Let's respond. The Blue guy: as you come to know me over the next few weeks or months you'll understand that was my humor. Like it or not, its me. You may not have known this, and I see how it may have come off as condescending since I am not yet well established as a personality. I assure you I bore no ill intent. Art: see above. Charlie: I asked that you leave. If you are completely incapabale of posting anything constructive and insist on derailing I'll contact a mod. I'll post one of my shoddy works next, prepare for disappointment. Edit: just saw the mod. Thank you for assisting.
Empty Chested Can you feel, so far away? Can you hurt, like I am? This hole you've made, do you even know? Look at it, dripping the blood of our love. Look in your hands, holding the heart. But where have you gone? Its all dark. Why would you leave? I'm falling apart. You've taken my core, my one reason to be. Now you've gone, there's nothing to see. Why, oh why? How could you do this? To me? Come back, give back, that thing you hold. I'll never see either of you again, because one is the other, and you're both the same. I feel its worth informing that my thoughts are rarely in order and I'm sure my writing reflects that perfectly. It sucks, I'm aware, but when I've got to let out some emotion I'm bottling up be it rage, sadness, joy, or anything writing has always been an outlet for me to clumsily crash through.
I hope that you will hold yourself to that. I have no qualms with KaW'ers, so long as they aren't being snobs. *Also, very nice poem. Wouldn't beat myself up over it, lol. Mine was only a few lines and much less substance.
I'll take the explanation. I fully support anyone who wants to help our forums improve especially with art or literature. It's always been about expression to me so I wouldn't judge poetry or art by technicality but by the honesty it brings. This poem's not bad at all.
At the end of the day, we're all people. Some of us are certainly worth scorn, but none, well not all at least, of you have earned that. And thank you wolf. I try to keep my message clear, even if my fumbling way of writing hinders me.