Childish War

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Rhetorical, May 28, 2014.

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  1. Ooook wall me when updated
     
    #21 KittyCat88-3, Jun 18, 2014
  2. I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT
     
    #22 tash777, Jun 21, 2014
  3. So if they are all killing each other why do the night owls not simply kill he day time siblings in there sleep
     
    #23 steelwolf, Jun 21, 2014
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    #24 FallenAngel12321, Jun 21, 2014
  5. Boring yan
     
    #25 MiZtReSs, Jun 22, 2014
  6. If you had constructive criticism, you could add that. Or at least make your feedback more pleasant.️ Attacking someone's writing is a sure way to make sure they'll never listen to you.
     
    #26 FallenAngel12321, Jun 22, 2014
  7. Excuse me?

    Boring?

    BORING!?

    This is far from boring. Like... Two billion light years away from boring. So don't you dare call it that again.

    Everyone may be entitled to their opinion, but don't reasonlessly insult a writers work. Especially when you couldn't do any better.
     
    #27 tash777, Jun 22, 2014
  8. I think she's referring to the fact that I haven't updated or something. As you can see, she referred to me as a good writer on the page before.

    And besides, girls, I eat criticism for breakfast.
     
    #28 Rhetorical, Jun 22, 2014
  9. No. That's not nutritional enough.

    Eat like some cereal or something too at least.
     
    #29 tash777, Jun 22, 2014
  10. I'm on a diet
     
    #30 Rhetorical, Jun 22, 2014
  11. NO DIET FOR YOU YOU SKINNY CHILD
     
    #31 tash777, Jun 22, 2014
  12. BUT I NEED TO WORK OFF ALL OF THESE COMPLEMENTS MY EGO GONNA GET FAT, TASH
     
    #32 Rhetorical, Jun 22, 2014
  13. I DONT CARE WHAT YOUR EGO LOOKS LIKE IM GONNA COMPLIMENT IT ANYWAY
     
    #33 tash777, Jun 22, 2014
  14. BUT IT WANTS TO HAVE A SUMMER BODY
     
    #34 Rhetorical, Jun 22, 2014
  15. IT ALREADY HAS A BEAUTIFUL FIGURE
     
    #35 tash777, Jun 22, 2014
  16. WHAT THE HECK HAVE I MISSED?! Lol I come back here and I see yelling
     
    #36 KittyCat88-3, Jun 22, 2014
  17. wall me when updated ^_^ please 
     
    #37 SkyLovesYoutoo__, Jun 22, 2014
  18. Ugh, you're such a talented writer. I don't mean ugh as in disgust. I mean it in an adorning way. Don't. Stop. Keep. Going. Please.
     
    #38 Puppuccino, Jun 23, 2014
  19. Bump
     
    #39 _Crazy_Eyes_, Jun 23, 2014
  20. I think we need Ali to get noticed by a publisher and become famous. Like, now.
     
    #40 tash777, Jun 23, 2014
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