chaos

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *BiteMePlz (01), Mar 22, 2011.

  1. Nana u come way later  just give me some time to think 
     
  2. but what about me??? 
     
  3. JUST GIVE ME TIME!!!!!!
     
  4. ok  *runs away cryin*
     
  5. The story is amazing. Between us pro writers, who's the best? Vote.
     
  6. Poor hill... He left his cookie behind...
     
  7. On my comment thread. Don't want Apoc's thread to fill up
     
  8. I made a separate thread for the cause lol
     
  9. Jack
    There jack sat in a bar looking for people to recruit for his expedition. Looking to his right he saw no one he believed that could be promising later.

    "ugh why is no one ever suitable for this mission" he banged on the table once in anger

    Then at the exact moment a man came in. The man had black hair that was in a Mohawk. He was kind of muscular and was average height.

    Jack staring at the man showed a smile for satisfaction which he hasn't have in a while(if u guys take that dirty I SWEAR TO GOD) jack standing up walked towards the man and took a seat next to him......
     
  10. I'm watching 
     
  11. Well I'm watching times 2! x2
     
  12. well im watchin every 5 mins. 
     
  13. Jack
    Jack sitting next to man now noticed that he had a tattoo that signaled that he used to be in the army. Jack used this to his advantage to start a conversation said

    "so u used to be in the army I see?" the man stared coldly at jack and said "yea so?" jack grew a smirk and said "I used to be a captain during my years of the army"

    The men talked a little to each other. Jack learned the mans name was hill and he left the army for being to merciful to people he believed should of died on the spot

    Hill learned a little about jack himself for example jack was a former army ranger also and he was a expert marksmen and can always be calm in the toughest situations........




    Watch this 
     
  14. I'm still watching