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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Miss_Author_Shana_Alana-, Apr 16, 2012.
-everyone try's to stop me from training but I just keep Going-
Sadie: Oh, Drake! Are you okay?
Drake: *gets up* yeah *is trying to cover up his depression but failing*
-finally stops after many days-
Sadie: Are you sure? You seem... Depressed...
Drake: *says hastily* yeah I'm fine
Sadie: I don't believe you. Tell me what's wrong.
-I look buff as I pass trying to get to my cabin without passing out-
Drake: *says hastily* nothing I've got to go now
-passes out on my bed-
(notice "look" buff vs "drake is buff")
Sadie: No, you don't. You have to tell me.
Drake: *blushes deeply* I'm in love with 3 girls and I'm not sure who I love most
Sadie: Really? That must suck. Who are they?
-me and 3 other guys form a band -
Drake: *blushes deeper* Kat, Kiki, and *blushes as red as possible* you
Sadie: M-me?! R-R-Really?! *blushes*
Drake: *tries to hide his face in his hands*
Sadie: Drake, look at me, you are not going to hide now.
-plays 'what makes you beautiful'-