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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Miss_Author_Shana_Alana-, Apr 16, 2012.
-I eat some left over pie-
Shana: It's okay... *looks down at the ground*
Man..this... Is ...some..good....pie!
Brett: can we start over?
Shana: Sure.
Mmmm
Brett: alright *smiles* want to come inside?
Shana: *smiles* Sure.
Brett: *holds the door open like a gentleman*
Shana: *walks inside and sits on a bed* Looks nice.
Brett: thank you *walks to a small stove and is preparing pasta*
Shana: Welcome. *smiles and walks around*
Brett: it's not that much
Shana: Still... *walks up behind him and looks over his shoulder*
Brett: *blushes* I'm just making pasta I don't eat their food
Shana: Hmm... *stands next to him*
Brett: *blushes and burns his hand but doesn't react besides he jerks back his hand*
-goes for a swim-
Shana: Oh! Are you okay?! *takes his hand and looks at it carefully*
Brett: I'm alright I've gone through hell…