Book 1 of The Darkness trilogy: The brave rescue

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Joseph_Beccue (01), Nov 15, 2012.

  1. Updatind today at 3 pm central time
     
  2. Will update tomorrow promise
     
  3. Will.update tomorrow.
     
  4. Sorry having major writers block for this story. Hell don't even know if anyone reads this one
     
  5. Still having writers block.
     
  6. "ahh Princess how right you are about that. Several unicorns perished when i made this whip."

    Suddenly Zaviar himself walks into the prison cell and grabs Cadence. He chains her against the wall with her back facing him.

    "Guards remove her shirt i want this whip to hit skin and dig in."

    Two Orc guards grab Cadence top and rip it off. Then they move out of the way

    "Now princess count how many times my whip strikes her back. If you skip a number or stop counting I'll start all over."

    "I will not do this Zaviar. You can't make me." Princess Zara says in defiance.

    Suddenly Zaviar flicks his wrist over so slightly and hits princess Zara right across the face with the whip. Leaving a scar no magic or matter of medicine can get rid of.
     
  7. Well since no one reads this story at all or commemts on it I'm killing it and letting it die