Book 1 of The Darkness trilogy: The brave rescue

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Joseph_Beccue (01), Nov 15, 2012.

  1. (Princess Zara's POV)

    "Curse you Zaviar. My father will not stand for this. He will send an army to get me back."

    "Muhahahahaha. Believe what you want little elf princess. Your never leaving. Your my prisoner forever."

    Suddenly another prisoner is thrown into the same cell as Princess Zara.
     
  2. All updates will be made with this account now. Yes i am the original author. Just my other account was on a different device that broke.
     
  3. Nice.. Oh well, I just messed it up. Sorry.
     
  4. All good Sebastian. Glad u like the story so far.
     
  5. Can you do like longer updates? Because I am getting really confused by all the short posts on here.
     
  6. Sure pix. Will do. Sorry for the short ones. I'm doing 2 stories.
     
  7. Princess Zara looks at rhe young looking human that just got thrown into the cage with her.

    "who are you"

    "My name is Candence. "

    "w... why did Zaviar throw you in here your just a human."

    "No I'm not im his sister."
     
  8. "H....his sister. I didn't know he had one."

    "He is my older brother by 5 minutes. What he doesn't know is I have a son. A son whose strength and powers are stronger then even his"

    "Really. That's great does he know you've been captured."

    "most likely young princess. He will be the one to unite the races of this world."
     
  9. "How would he do that Cadance. All he can do is save us. He is human after all."

    "No he is everything. My mother was human and my dad a elf. Gale's dad was half dwarf and half wizard."

    "Are you serious. That is crazy. Who was your dad?"

    "sadly I do not know. It was a passing fling between him and my mother."

    "oh i see. Well maybe he is still alive."

    "Most likely Princess. Now get some sleep we have some long days ahead of us."
     
  10. (Gale's pov)

    "where are we going Kevi. We've been riding for hours."

    "young Gale you must be patient we are headed towarss the city of Gafat. There we will get more intel and find a guide."

    "did you say Gafat that's a Zaviar held city. We can't simply walk in. He'll have guards every where."

    "it may be held by Zaviar but the resistence group there is the largest and strongest in all of the cities held by Zaviar."
     
  11. Ill update soon
     
  12. Will update again in 3 days been busy
     
  13. "Hey Cain whats it like being a wizard?" Gale askes.

    "well it's not all fun and games. Training takes years to complete and can sometimes be fatal. Alot of wizards die before they can complete their training."

    "I see. Can any one become a wizard?"

    "No there is a simple test you must pass if you can't then you have no powers."

    "What's the test?"

    "you must be able to turn a rock into water. Really not that hard."

    "a rock in to water. You mean like this."

    Suddenly a rock next Cain turns into water. Surprising allall members if the party.
     
  14. Will update tomorrow
     
  15. The entire group stops and looks at Gale.

    Cain is the first to speak. "Gale how can you do this? You can only be a wizard if you have the blood of at least two different races in you."

    Gale looks at Cain "Well according to my mom my grandfather was an elf."

    Kevi instantly straightens. "did you say your grandfather was an Elf?"

    "Yes is that a problem."
     
  16. Kevi looks at Gale "what was your grandmothers name."

    "Tiffany. Why?"

    "I was afraid of that. Gale I'm your grandfather. My king must have found out. That would explain why he told me to look for you"

    Cain looks at Gale "well young human we need to train you now. To figure out what elements you can conjure up."

    "Cain that can wait until after we take back Qafar."

    The group then rides to within 10 miles of Qafar and rest during the night

    (Princess Zara POV)

    "Princess wakey wakey. Time to eat."

    "ugh Cadence its still late. Is it not?"

    "no my princess it is morning"

    Suddenly the cage opens and a new prisoner is thrown in. princess Zara looks at the prisoner and gasps.
     
  17. Update in 1 day
     
  18. Sorry been busy. Will update in couple days.
     
  19. Sorry fans been busy. Will update in a couple of days
     
  20. (princess Zara's pov)

    The sight before princess Zara is one of unimaginable horror. A young elf boy whose tongue and eyes have been removed.

    "Zaviar how could you do this to somebody you horrible monster" the princess says through tears.

    "muhahahaha I'm evil. You don't know the definition of that word princess. I've seen things of unthinkable evil beyond your wildest belief."

    "Zavier how could you have become so evil. I remember you when you my nice younger brother who couldn't harm a fly if he wanted to." Cadence says.

    "ahh sister you speak. Time for you to get your torture sister. I'm gonna have you given 1000 lashes with a whip made of unicorn hair."

    Princess Zara gasps. "Unicorns are sacred you can't obtain their hair unless you either kill them or gain their trust."