Blood Rage

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  1. espisode 10

    Tynos had his father order a Black Maumba off of the internet, 5 day wait before delivery. He had all of it almost ready, to then get whatever he wanted and no one would be able to stop him.
    5 days and the snake had arrived at his house, he then killed it and then drained it of its vemon and removed all of its scales to leave the skelaton, the fangs were all he wanted.
    Friday night Tynos had broken into Joseph's room, and hid behind the door, a walky-talky in his hand awaiting the signal.
    Ari- Joseph is approaching upstairs.
    He then turned it off and prepared to assult. As soon as Joseph had opened the door Tynos punched Joseph in the face, kneed him in the gut and pressured on a nerve to knock Joseph unconcious. He then got out a few needles and drained several vials of Joseph's blood. Then injected the poison and brought out the fangs and penetrated in that same spot. To avoid being caught Tynos quickly stepped out then left the building unseen. His mission, accomplished.
    The next morning he was curious about this blood he just stole from Joseph. So he grabbed a vile then drank it. He was overcome by his powers coming in and walked outside stumbling, a huge headache, when one of his neighbors approached him Tynos put his hand to his neighbor's chest and drained the life out of his neighbor, the neighbor now laying on the ground lifeless. Blood streaming out from their chest, there was a gash in their chest. Suddenly, Tynos felt stronger and healthier, his headache stopped. Tynos was suddenly overcome with joy of his new gift, he can now easily crush whoever he wanted. And he wanted to make an example of it.
    Later in the afternoon Joseph had left to the chemistry building, Phillip off guard in their room. Tynos knocked on the door, Phillip opened up grumpy.
    Phillip- What do you want with me?
    Tynos- Your life.
    Tynos punched Phillip in the gut, throwing him back and that was enough to make Phillip fight back, as he was about to throw a fireball at Tynos, he rejected it, and then put his arm to Phillip's chest.
    Tynos- Die fool.
    Power surged through Tynos. And he started to produce fire just as Phillip was. In one big breath Tynos spat fire all over the room like a raging dragon. Leaving everything burning he left laughing like an evil madman.

     Tynos is strong! Woah 

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  4. episode 11

    As the week progressed more and more people were disappearing. Things were getting weird until Savannah disappeared. This was the last hint to Joseph that someone was behind this. He then decided to have everyone in the group come together.
    In Marie's Room they were silent and had Kira use her mind to scan that no one was close to them at all.
    Joseph- Nearly 80% of the school has been disappearing and Savannah too. I think this is Tynos's work.
    Then suddenly images flashed into his head, causing Joseph a severe head ache.
    ^ Joseph was looking through the eyes of a person near death, he can not move it all, blood in the ground in front of him, then he realized... this was his death a few weeks ago, then he saw Tynos come out of his car^
    The Flashback ended.
    Everyone can see the pain in Joseph's eyes.
    Joseph- Tynos killed me. He ran me over on purpose.
    A sudden mood of seriousness and anger sturred in everyone.
    Mia- What do you want to do?
    Lavender- I say we go stop Tynos before it is too late. Maybe everyone is not dead but kidnapped.
    Kira- Okay, Lets say he is behind all of this... where is everyone? A few thousand people missing in 1 house?
    Joseph- He owns a larger property , I remember him bragging to me where and what. That is where he would be.
    They then took the next day to prepare, Joseph decided to bring out some of his money he has been saving, he bought a new car, and some assult riffles and handguns at an armory shop.
    Joseph- Guys, sorry to have been holding my fortune and not share any, I wanted to save it for when I was an adult and needed it.
    He gave an innocent smile at tge group.
    Marie and everyone were astonished.
    Marie- Possessions dont really matter. Money does mot either. Just Gotta be responsible with it.
    They all got in the car and went up to Tynos Ranch. You can tell where it was because Tynos's family was so cøcky as to have signd put up to direct people to go drive to it just to see it. Driving up to the house Mia make the car invisible but then Joseph passed it.
    Joseph- One more thing.
    He bit himself causing himself to bleed and drank a little if his blood.
    He then turned the car around and sped to Tynos Ranch.
    Joseph- Lets go!

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  5. episode 12

    The car broke through the gate in front of Tynos family ranch. The car jumped into the air then slammed back down onto the ground. Mia let go of the car when it landed but by the time anyone noticed, the car was at the front door. Security came out shooting, but then Lavender stepped out and shot them both in the knees then arms. In all of the madness all Joseph can think about was finding the kidnapped.
    Joseph- Kira! We need you.
    Kira- On it!
    Gun shots were continually fired which made it hard to consentrate.
    Kira- There is a room in the house. Door in the ground on the porch!
    Marie used her power then to turn the list the ground under the concrete and threw it to block the back up security as everyone went down the stairs. Just as everyone was in Marie closed it.
    Marie- We are clear.
    Ari then stepped out in front of the door.
    Ari- Are you now?
    Ari disappeared but you can see traces of where she went. Lavender and Mia were on the ground.
    Mia- I feel like I was hit a hundred times.
    Kira- Super speed.
    Marie then changed the form of the water in the room and filled it with fog, unable to see Ari ran into a wall and fell hard. Joseph heard it then ran over and bit Ari, sucked out his blood from her. Then he put his hand on her head. She fell unconcious.
    Marie- Ewww. What are you doing?
    Joseph- I removed my blood from her and I cleared her of any energy left in her. Please rest her at the top, we dont want her injured.
    He then walked over to Mia and Lavender and placed his hands on theirs. Energy flowed through them and they health faster than usual.
    Joseph- I bit myself in the car and gave myself to control energy within people. I can have as many powers as I want, not sure as you guys.
    Before the concersation can continue they heard screaming behind the door, they opened it then saw Bliz sucking the soul out of a man, when he was finished he looked over at the group and laughed.
    Bliz- Hey guys, welcome to Tynos ranch.
    He ran over in a sprint then aimed for Kira, as he got closer you can see her spirit leaving her body, everyone was in pain. Joseph in response ran in super speed to melee Bliz in the head then kick him back. Stumpling to the ground Bliz looked surprised.
    Bliz-Ari's powers huuh?
    Blood was running off his head and Joseph's too but it recovered.
    Bliz- No need for you to take mine, I like them. Then in a sudden jolt he sprinted out of the room through another door. Lavender was about to chase after him but Joseph stopped her.
    Joseph- Too dangerous. We can't risk losing any of you.
    Marie- We came here Joseph knowing that coming itself a risk. We are with you all the way.
    More screening happened down the hall, there was a laugh too, easy to distinguish. It was Tynos.
    As they barged into the room Tynos was draining the life out of one of the college students. When he finished he looked over at them and sighed.
    Tynos- I was hoping you come later. I am full now. Lilly.
    Lighting shot out of the corner and Marie immediately caught it. Energy was building up in Marie's hands and you can see the lightning in her hands growing, over whelming... then she used one hand to redirect it at Lilly. A piece of the wall fell and hit her on the head , causing her to collapse.
    Tynos- What a shame, we thought you only controlled water.
    He then reached into a room behind him and pulled out Savannah, tears coming out of her eyes.
    Savannah- No no no , please dont!
    Before Tynos can kill Savannah Kira penetrated his mind, freezing him. He was thinking he was killing her at the moment, and the aftermath. But then he fell to the ground.
    Tynos- Whats happening?
    Then he woke up seeing Savannah with Joseph and the group.
    Tynos- How?!
    Joseph- You dont need to know. Give up and you wont be severely harmed.
    Tynos- With all this power?! No!
    Tynos shot fire at the group, before she can absorb the fire Marie stepped in front and was hit hard, still alive.
    Before anyone can go after Tynos he escaped in the smoke, then they went to aid Marie. Joseph tried healing her but it would not work. Her wounds were too severe.
    Marie- Jo... Joseph, I feel empty inside, like I am drifting away... take...
    She then caughed up some blood.
    Marie- Take my powers. Don't let them go to waste.
    Obeying Marie he bit her and sucked his blood out of her.
    Marie- Thank you love
    She then kissed him one last time on the cheek then went into eternal sleep.
    Tears overcame everyone. This was not supposed to happen... not like this. The kidnapped prisoners were all released and the group left in silence, Joseph carrying Marie's body out.
    Joseph- I'll burry her at her home town, and tell her parents.

    A Month later at Marie's funeral there were flowers covering the tombstone bottom to top.
    Joseph- I will avenge you.
    The sun set, with Joseph biting his wrist, to then fly off to his home town. Hoping to find peace, temporarily at least.

     This episode was heart crushing. I have had story timeline thought of someone for a year now but still sad part.

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  6.  I guess  means it was ok?
     
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  9. Yes it Was awesome.
     
  10.  bump for next episode later tonight
     
  11.  Bump for episode i have half done, for tonight