Blood Rage

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Master-Gonzo-the-Phoenix, Jan 17, 2012.

  1. Best part will be  but must happen
     
  2. Bump! Moar
     
  3. Bump!

    It's good but I still don't C myself
     
  4. LILLY?!?!?!?!?!!!!??

    O.O


    No... Just no...


    But... *sigh*


    >.>
     
  5. You did not give a name for me to use chloe 
     
  6. Bump. Update. Yo. 
     
  7. part 4

    The night was dark and bone chilling. Joseph was not regretting the night at all but only that he did not have a warmer jacket. He felt as if he were being stalked, so he started to walk a little faster. When he started to cross the street he saw a car in the distance, it had plenty of time to stop and he will be across the street. The car seeing him sped up, and by the time Joseph was half way across the street was hit and flew 7 feet. The bones in his legs and ribs were crushed, and his skull was cracked with him bleeding out... he was numb and now felt death coming. The driver and passenger stepped out of the car. It was Tynos and Bliz.
    Bliz- Dude, I think you went a little far. I knew we were going to teach him a lesson but not this.
    Tynos- Quiet, he deserves it and I am putting him out of his mesery.
    Bliz stepped back into the car as Tynos walked over to Joseph's dying body and laughed.
    Tynos- This should show you to never have messed with me. Enjoy the afterlife.
    Tynos kicked Joseph then walked away back into his car and drove away.
    Several students saw Joseph's body then called for an ambulance. As he can hear he sirens yelling into he night Joseph closed his eyes... drifting into death.
    He opened his eyes a second later, feeling weightless and in white clothing. A set of stairs and a large golden gate ahead. As he reached the gate and he was in clear view a figure appeared in front of him.
    Figure- Lets walk son.
    Speachless Joseph walked with him. A book then appeared in is arms, the Book of Life, as he opened it.
    Figure- You are Joseph Alan Venezuela. You died ahead of your time.
    Joseph- So I am dead?
    Figure- yes. you were trampled by a car.
    Joseph- If I can have another chance for my life, a miracle that would be great. But I know people do not get second chances. My life was starting to get better.
    Figure- You don't think people get second chances huuh? I beg to differ.
    Joseph- People get second chances?
    Figure- Very much so. But at a price. Are you willing to pay a price?
    Joseph thought long and hard. The trail they were walking on was endless.
    Joseph- I would appreciate it and live with it.
    The figure then signaled to stop then put his hand on Joseph's head. Then he felt a sudden surge of energy through his body.
    Figure- I have just given you the price you must pay. You can perform extrodinary things. Your blood is now valuable and a curse. Power comes to whoever it enters,Even yourself. Be careful. You can remove it from people, at a price.
    Joseph- This is great, but how is it a curse?
    Figure- That is for you to learn boy. Now go continue your life.
    The figure then reached to Joseph's chest and a sudden surge of power sparked into his heart. He can feel his heart beating again. His eyes still closed but he can hear some people crying around him. He opened his eyes a little and saw Marie, his parents , and his friends. His heart beat was then showing up on the monitor as he closed his eyes back up. Everyone stopped crying then were silent in shock. His parents spoke up
    Mom- He is... alive.
    Dad- Joseph, if you can hear us signal.
    Joseph opened up one eye then closed it.
    The doctor walked in astonished.
    Doctor- How is this possible... he has been dead for 24 minutes? ...
    Marie- Its a miracle.
    Joseph was still in pain but he was glad to be alive. It was a long night... but Joseph was just glad to have his second chance.



    Sorry if this offends anyone. This was the best way I can figure for story to play out.

    Thanks for reading.

    If you like bump. If you love. Fist pump!
     
  8. Danny, as your loving sister I must say, make your updates longer!!!  Too short!!  
     
  9. Episode too short? 
     
  10. bump!!!!!!! 






     
  11. Can you use Gina? ._.
     
  12. Wait- woah woah woah woah woah. ;n;


    I don't want to be mean to Joseph! Lilly is! Lilly is! Gina's innocent! She likes lemon! Nooo! ;n;
     
  13. I'm still not in it after 4 parts!
    If u don't remember me, my character was Ash!