Blood On the Ice

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *SensualPie (01), Nov 13, 2011.

  1. Don't make me use these. 

    (Tiffany how can you end it with him checking the wrong vain?)
     
  2. What? It's funny 
     
  3. It's vein. Not vain. And read it again! I posted another comment. 
     
  4. MOAR SENSUAL! 
     
  5. I spell stuff wrong WAY to often.
     
  6. I'll try to update today, kay?
    It's just that my iPhone battery needs to be changed, it drains in like an hour.
    Don't give up on me! 
     
  7. I won't give up....that's for quitters
     
  8. Matthew's POV
    ~
    "I don't care what you heard, Anderson! I don't think this was an accident!" the chief shouted.
    I cringed against his voice and attempted to reason with him again.
    "Sir, Rose told me specifically what she saw. She wouldn't lie"-
    "She was the last person to see her alive, Matthew! I saw her enter and exit the bathroom on the surveillance video. Bring her in."
    "What? But"-
    "I SAID BRING HER IN! I don't care if you're her boyfriend, I want Rose Fursetino in here for questioning! Tomorrow!"
    And with that, the cheif stormed out of the room, slamming the door shut. The doorframe shook, and I had to stop my coffee from tipping over. Sighing, I reached over and lifted the phone off of it's dock.

    I was so screwed.


    (Short update. )
     
  9. Uh oh this is bad do something Matthew
     
  10. I has another question! 

    Do you want Matthew to find out about Rose being a murderer? Or do you want her bad deeds to stay hidden? Why or why not?
     
  11. Him to find out. More drama and a lot better story
     
  12. Him to not find out....him finding out seems kinda typical that's what I would predict would happen
    Or
    Him to find out and help her cause he loves her so much n he kills people also....I just don't want another heartbreak story

    But whatever you choose I will support !!!!
     
  13. YES!!! DO THAT!!!
     
  14. He finds out and decideds to try to help her but she ends up changing him and they help eachother kill people and he gets her out of it since he's a cop
     
  15. I want him to find out!! Drama-mama!! 