Blood Lust

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Master-Gonzo-the-Phoenix, Jul 12, 2012.

  1. I read it, I didn't like it
     
  2. Moooooooore.

    Dang, that Savannah chick is pretty awesome.
     
  3. Well ._. it involves blood, obviously, if I put it in the title. As I did not post in the end, but I am rebooting a story I typed up in December/January.
     
  4. ._. bump, and update it
     
  5. I'll update after I type up the next one ._. I will type up tonight, and get home tomorrow
     
  6. I roundhouse kick the person who made this and I bìtch slap the people who don't like tash's bloodlust book- yeah well I fùcking didn't like this book either -grabs my katanas- now u do not dis tash or I will have to kill you -giggles like an insane person with a little girl pitch- death die hah hah hah hah hah hah
     
  7. Hmmm am I the Dan? Sweet.

    I agree with the other people, use quotation marks and separate paragraphs. Slow it down a bit describe things it'll be all good.
     
  8. Keelie, do not post on my thread again, you broke the ToU all over that. I do not want anything to happen to this thread because you cannot follow simple rules.
     
  9. Part 2:

    Joseph:
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    Savannah:
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    Nina:
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    Kyrin:
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    Calvin:
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    Dan:
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    Chase:
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    It is late night and Joseph called his friends if they wanted to get some late night ice cream. Everyone except Kyrin was able to make it since she had to get up early the next morning for work. So only Savannah, Calvin, Nina and Dan joined. They spent a few hours at the store talking and slowly eating their ice creams. When they left they made a slow pace toward the college. On the way there Calvin and Nina slowed down to be behind the group and had one of their many romantic moments. They caught up within a few minutes and then everyone split ways. Joseph's dorm building was the farthest than anyone else's.
    The night was unusual, and very dark. There was not a sound to be heard, only a long walk. Then it was next, to cross the street to his dorm building. As he was walking across a car on the other side of the street backing up a lot, he did not care about it much, he only thought it was weird. Seconds later he felt a heavy force crashed into his side, his head crashed into the ground and his body skipped like a rock when skipped across a lake. All his bones in his arm, his left leg, his spine are now broken, and it was becoming increasingly difficult to breath, and his blood was now spilling out to the ground. A man stepped out of the car, and as he got closer he became more clear.
    It was Chase.

    Chase- That will show you to stand up to me punk! Now enjoy the rest of eternity in hell!

    Chase kicked Joseph's face and Joseph blanked out.

    10 minutes later an Joseph was found still alive by a Professor who was on his way leaving the college.

    5 Minutes after that an ambulance came and picked Joseph up, half way to the hospital his heart gave out and is now dead.

    A flash of white blinded Joseph, and a path showed in front of him... He did not know where he was or what to do... What to think.


     That concludes Part 2, as for the characters I felt best to add faces to names, sorry if pictures are too big, and lastly I hope you enjoyed it.

    Thanks for reading, and now the story will become more and more interesting.


    [​IMG] Gonzo1993
     
  10. part 3:

    Joseph:
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    Un-Named Figure:
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    The path was narrow and dark, it was the only difference in the large blank white space. It appeared Joseph had no choice but to walk down that path. After walking along the path for a while he came across a heavy bag that he was barely able to lift. When he looked inside the bag was full of golden coins. He took a few minutes to believe what it was. Joseph then carried the bag down the path off his back until he saw a stranger. The stranger appeared tp be a poor man with no money. Feeling bad for the man Joseph gave him a gold coin. After that he went down the road more there was a line of poor people, he gave a coin to every single one of them. And finally there was one golden coin left. Finally there was 1 more poor person, but he was laying next to a slot machine, the slot machine had a sign at the top " guaranteed win". It looked like a fin game, and it would make him even more gold. But, instead of playing the slot machine Joseph gave the last person his last gold coin, and moved on. Next the path lit up and as he walked down the path more a buffet of his favorite foods appeared all on one table. He couldn't believe what it was... and how it was all there he was wondering. Even more he was getting hungry looking at all the foods, but then he realized ," what if none of this is real?"
    So he passed the table and went more along the path. Eventually there was a split in the path, left or right.
    On the left he can see clearly another bag and a bunch of food gathered in one pile, on the right he can see it going on forever. The left side was surely tempting, but then again why did he feel as if he were dead? If he were dead wouldn't that mean all those temptations did not matter? Joseph took the risk and went right, but after going maybe 10 steps to the right a sudden force pulled on him, he sped up so fast he could feel his body distort. It was only after 1 second that he lasted at a golden gate that read " Heaven" at the top. At the other side of the gate was a figure who looked old but you can sense a presence of wisdom from him. As Joseph walked toward the gate it opened up and the figure walked beside him. The figure pulled out a book from his robes and handed it to Joseph, it had his name on it.
    Joseph- Sir, what is this?
    Figure- it is your story son.

    Joseph handed the book back to the figure and the man went to the back of the book.

    Figure- It says here you were not supposed to die today the way you did, you were supposed to die of age in your late 80's.

    Joseph- Today was unexpected then?

    Figure- Yes, unfortunately. Not everything goes according to plan.
    Humans cannot be controlled, so there is no way for me to know their exact destiny, I can only plan it at birth, after that everything is just on its own from there.

    Joseph - Thats understood. Too bad there is no such thing as a second chance.

    Figure- There are but they are rarely given, they usually end up with consequences that always get someone hurt. And not only that but it would rewrite the stories of many people's lives. There would be a large ripple effect.

    Joseph - Sir, when was the last time
    you gave someone a second chance?

    Figure- Not long ago, it did not affect anyone more than her life, she was drowned and died, but I let her have another chance to live the rest of her life.

    Joseph- thats extrodinary

    The figure laughed and grinned then stopped them both.

    Figure- Son, how would you like a second chance at life? But I want to make things more insteresting.

    He placed his hand on Joseph's chest and power flowed through him.

    Joseph- What did you do?

    Figure- Giving you another chance, and giving you a gift, some might see it as a curse, but I will present to you as a gift. Now all who consume your blood will attain the most intersting of abilities. Abilities of their most wildest dreams. Including yourself.

    Joseph- Thank you, I will do my best with this new power.

    Figure- Be careful, anyone that uses this can become the worse of foes, you must be careful with this.

    The figure then placed his left hand on Joseph's head and right on the chest where the heart would be.

    Figure- I am going to repress your death as well as this comversation except for these instructions of the powers I have given you.

    Joseph- Thank you Sir

    The figure laughed

    Figure- No need to call me sir, rather you can call me Father.

    A sudden rush of power flowed over Joseph as he felt himself fall into a void then back into his own body in the real world. His body ached and was in pain, he woke up in an ambulance as it reached the hospital. In shock the nurses took him
    to the emergency room.


    I know this one is long but, I got it done I hope those who read it enjoyed it. And thanks for reading.

    Now I think it gets crazier ._. booh yeah.


    [​IMG] Gonzo1993
     
  11.  I like the story so far.

    I am debating about giving Joseph a bit of a " love life" 
     
  12. With Savannah
     
  13.  Hmmmm.... idk . That'd make things tricky
     
  14. part 4:

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    Nurse:
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    Joseph woke up in a hosptial room with no one around. He was wondering how he got there, all he remembered was walking home from getting ice cream with his friends and then all else was blank. All he can remember is he has a power. What kind of power though and how? It took him a few minutes to remember it had to do with his blood. When a nurse came in she looked shocked that he had waken up already. She immediately called in the doctor and then a tall White man stepped into the room and examined Joseph .

    Doctor- Welcome back Joseph, good to see you are still in the world of the living.

    It was very difficult to say anything, but Joseph attempted nonetheless.

    Joseph- Liv -ing?

    Doctor- Yes, you died on your way here to the hospital, you were hit by a car in front of your college. You amazingly sprung back to life when you had reached this hospital. It is unexplained and none of our doctors can understand what happened. You were dead for 10 minutes.
    You lost a lot of blood, all of it has been cleaned up of coarse. We managed to stop the bleeding when we got you here to the hospital. You have several fractures and each of your arms and legs are broken, only set of bones not broken was your spine and skull which is good, and you are missing a few ribs from the accident. We are sorry to say you will have a long recovery time and afraid to say you might not be able to walk again.

    The doctor then left the room telling the nurse to make sure Joseph was taken care of. After so much to take it Joseph fell back asleep.

    The next day Joseph woke up with balloons and flowers next to his bed. The nurse walked in and then called the front to let people in. Joseph's parents , Savannah, and Phil walked in. His mom was weeping, and his dad couldn't stand to look.

    Phil tried to cheer Joseph up by telling jokes, all which sucked. While Savannah sat by his side while looking at flowers by his bed.

    Savannah - These flowers stand for health and well being, if you put them next to someone who is ill or injured, they are supposed to heal faster or get well faster, I looked it up and bought them for you.

    She gave Joseph a smile he got an idea.

    Joseph- Sa .. Sav aahh

    She covered his mouth to prevent him from speaking.

    Savannah- The nurse said you are not allowed to speak.

    Joseph- But .. I nee need... a favor.

    Savannah- What is it?

    He then signaled her to move in closer. He then whispered into her ear.

    Joseph- They have my blood here in the hospital... I need it, can you get it for me? ... please...

    Savannah- What? Why would you need your blood? I don't underst...

    He gave her the look that says " Don't ask". She then left the room ans snuck into where the hospital keeps leftover blood that the patients use. She found Joseph's and took it all in her backpack. When she got back into the room everyone else had left.

    Savannah- I got it all. Why do we need this?

    Joseph - Mix it with my water.

    Savannah- Ewwww... what has gotten into you? For all the 15 years we have been friends you have not asked me to do something so gross. I'll do it but I won't be around for you to gag it up, do you want me to keep the rest?

    Joseph- For now, yes. Then take it home.

    She then mixed some of it with his water, then left, his water turned completely red. She left the hospital.
    Then Joseph had just remembered, he needed to drink it. Plan failure.

    When the nurse came in she saw his cup and then almost threw it out..

    Joseph- Wait!

    At the top of hos voice , coughing afterward.

    Joseph - Fruit... punch.

    The nurse then decided to let him drunk it, as the blood entered gis body he could feel power within himself, it was almost ovwrwhelming. He knew what he wanted before he had the drunk.

    Nurse- Drink it all...

    And then when the cup was empty she left the room. Joseph's wounds all covered up and he could feel his bones snap into place then heal themselves. Then after a minute he was fully healed. It was astonishing. Then he wondered... how fast he can heal... since all that happened so fast. He got a knife that was supposed to be for his food and cut his arm, it healed almost immediately.
    He then decided to not make things too weird and stayed 3 more nights at the hospital, funny thing is they did not continually check up on him.
    The 5th day he bribed the nurse as she walked in.

    Joseph- Nurse, I have not been checked on in a few days... what if I healed completely by then?

    Nurse- Thats not possible. And we have not checked lately because we know you are doing just fine. You will probably be here another month to heal some.

    Joseph- How about I walk to that door right there? If I make it there with no assistance, I can go.

    Nurse- Deal. But that is impossible without your legs or arms, they are broken.

    Joseph smirked then shifted himself toward the door, removed the monitors from his body, them walked toward the door swinging his hips as he got his clothes.

    Joseph- I win the bet, I have beaten the impossible. Thanks for playing.

    He went to the nearest restroom in the hospital and put on his old clothes he got ran over in, then he left the hospital a feeling way better than he had ever felt before.


     No freakin' way! Did that just happen? Yes Now stay tuned because I will write more if I get bored again later. Ohhh and I am not putting up any pictures of Phil because he is not much of a significant player anyway. You'll see what I mean.


    [​IMG] Gonzo1993