Um...you might want to not use emoticons just because they ruin the aspect of translating their dialogue and their tone into a specific mood...it's based on how accurately you describe the feeling you're trying to portray, get my feeling? Like , ruins the effect of saying "He sang to me and only me, my sentimental core got the better of me as he stared into my eyes, into my thoughts." with the emoticon, it just makes it look...trashy, really.
alright. Hahaha. Thank you for the comment. I just really like emoticons. I'll edit what I'm writing now
Aww I like the Emoji. The give me some sort of visual feelings. Oh and to theto theto the! Update!
-Jake's POV- Highway to hell! Yeah! Highway to hell! Ding dong ding dong "Who the fuck is at the door?!" I thought to myself as I went out of the room thinking about... Anna. I feel stupid. I never should've done that. I sighed every time I thought of her. Why is she the only girl I can't stand seeing? She gives me this weird vibe. I opened the door and I was in horror, but I kept my calm self and talked like I always do. "Oh it's you." I put on the not interested face and I continued saying, "What's up Danny boy?" I smirked. But at the same time I did that, my heart was beating fast. I know I did wrong. I just want to say I'm sorry , but I couldn't let my pride down. I gulped silently when he glared at me with those frosty blue eyes... I was honestly a wimp when it comes to Daniel Owens... But I never show it. I felt terror coming, "That's a pretty huge mark on your right side of the face. What happened, Jake?" When he said my name at that last line, I had goosebumps. I thought of him as another nerd in the school and so I gained my courage and smirked, "A pretty aggressive girl slapped me real hard and went berserk on school. That was amusing to watch. Hmmm you know how sexy she is under that clothes? To die for, man!" I faked my laugh and luckily it really sound realistic. As I laughed to what I said, I felt like a sick person. Playing with Anna like that. Why... Does she tempt me so much? Nervousness came rushing through my veins as he grabbed my collar, glared at me and threatened me, "You fucking jerk! I told you to never go near her ever again, or you'd die by my hands! And I am not kidding! You sick bastard! Go near my Anna again, and be prepared for the worst. You made her sick, and I will not ever forgive you! Even if you were my close friend before! Rot in hell!!!!" I was shaking in fear. I couldn't even act like I wasn't. He punched me as hard as he could and fear was all I let him see of me. He walked away, I closed the door as fast as I could. There was blood. So I treated it. I punched the walls of my room. I drowned myself with Asking Alexandria's music. Why did I even do that to her? Why do I have to be tempted by Daniel Owens' best friend?! Why do I... Why am I... Why am I like this? Why do I... Love her.
-Last Month- Flashback~ "Anna looks really hot. I never knew there was this side of her!" Said my friend, Zachary. I looked at her and my heart started beating fast. There was a party at one of the populars house. Diana Crimsons, my girlfriend that I am using for popularity reputation. But sad to say, Anna was actually much popular than her. I looked at Anna in pure lust; she was wearing a short skirt, that if once she bends we will see her underwear, but this girl is smart. Using a cycling under... not a slut at all. She was wearing a black and red corset, which made her curves visible. What made her look hotter was her 5 inch red sandals. She made her hair slight curly and she was wearing light black eyeshadow and dark black eyeliner. Her lips was pink and glossy. And then I remembered the theme of the party: Medieval mixed with Modern. Her outfit made all the boys drool on her. Of course, her best friend Daniel Owens was there, so no one dared to come near her. Anna and I were still friends that time, so was Daniel. I went near them and we were conversing. But, one of Daniel's friend called him for beer pong. I took the chance to flirt with Anna. Damn, she tempted me so much. I was whispering in her ear and she was gently pushing me away. My heart was racing. What's wrong with me?! I couldn't take it anymore. So I tricked her. ----------------- "Jake, where are we going?" she said nervously as I blindfolded her. "I'll take you to Danny. He asked me something." I said in a soft convincing voice. "Hmmm... Okay." She was blushing and smiling. It made me want her more. But in the same time my heart crushed. It was clear that she loves Danny, no matter how much she denies it, the eyes says it all. But Danny... Oh Danny. Don't hurt her by getting another girlfriend. I'd kill you if she cries. I took her to Diane's room and took off her blindfold. "Where is Danny?" She smiled. "He'll come... No, he actually won't come." I smirked at her and pushed her in the bed. "No! Jake! What are you doing?! Diane's your girlfriend!! Stop it Jake!" I was kissing her neck. Holding her tightly, I never want to let go. I never felt this feeling before. This feeling is beautiful. "I know you like it Anna. Stop resisting!" I chuckled. "Jake, think of what you're doing. Please! Stop it!!!!!" She pushed me when I almost took off her bra. I glared at her and pushed her one more time. "Go! Before I rape you!" I pointed at the door. She stood up quickly and the next minute, she wasn't here now... She was crying. I made her cry. I was surprised when someone slapped me, "You bastard! You cheater!!" It was Diane. I took her hand and said, "Shut up you slut! I never even liked you anyway!" She was in horror as I stared deeply into her deep brown eyes. "Now you know how it feels to be hurt by the one you love. Yeah, it's all about Anna. You'll never overpass her. I..." "You what?! You love her?!" She slapped me again with the other hand, I didn't feel the pain. I was numb and unable to move. Was my heart just broken? "Yeah! I do! What are you gonna do about it!?" I yelled at her in the most convincing angry voice I had. I was left for words when she cried, "No, no, Jake. I love you so much. Don't leave me." "I'm sorry Diane. I'm sorry for using you." I sighed. She wiped her tears and stared at me in madness. She put her bronze hair on the side and said, "You better watch out Jake Rowe, 'cause you won't know what will happen to everyone's sweet Anna! You cheating bastard! Get the fuck out of my room!!" She said as she punched me so many times. I pushed her on the bed and glared at her with my green intimidating eyes, "Touch her and feel my wrath!" I swiftly went out of the room and the house. I told Zachary I had to go and everyone else I knew. Anna, I'm sorry...
-Diana's POV- "I'm glad this party is a blast, once again." I laughed as I talked to my best friend, Ariana Jameson. "Gladly so! So sleepover later?" She said in her sophisticated voice. She brushed her blonde hair with her hands and smiled. "Yeah, sure!" I said as I looked into her grey eyes. Anna Skye caught my eyes, I never knew she could dress up like that. Lucky Danny. I giggled. I stared at the love of my life. I've been watching him ever since I was still in 7th grade. And now, I got him. And I will do anything to get him back. But he was... His eyes were on Anna. Probably because they were friends and he's amazed too. He would never cheat on me... right? I felt worry in my nerves. Please Jake, no. Danny left Anna's side and I was still caught in Jake's action towards Anna. He was whispering in her ear. I was feeling angry. He was looking at her like he never looked at me. That look that's only given to a guy who loves a girl so much that he would do anything for her. The look Daniel Owens gives Anna all the time. I had goosebumps when he placed a blindfold on Anna. I was feeling strange and I had the urge to follow them. Why is he going to the direction of my room?! I stared outside my door. Anna, you bitch! She was crying and Jake seemed hurt. When Anna suddenly opened the door I hid as fast as I could and went inside my own room. I slapped him on the face. I was heartbroken. He was really a jerk after all. We were yelling to each other. All the things he said, a part of me died. The nice Diana Crimsons is dead... Now it went back to the EVIL one. Watch out Anna... You're gonna want to never live in this world again ----------------- hey guys :3 so what do you think of the story so far? FEEDBACK please xx I'll update later tonight