Best Friend

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -KittyInBunnyland-, May 16, 2012.

  1. -Anna's POV-

    "Oh my god! Crystal!" I yelled as she smiled.

    "A-Anna... Help me." She said as she got the cake out of the oven.

    This is the worst. Whenever she eats cake it means she's depressed and... she wants to give up on her life.

    I hurried to her side and hugged her. Danny prepared water. Lots and lots of water. It was her liquor.

    "Stop it. You'll be fine. You'll get this through. What happened? Tell me." I told her as I wiped off the chocolate on her fingers.

    "I'm fine Anna. I'm just baking for old times sake." She smiled as a tear came down her face and she broke down.

    I wiped her tear off and shook my head in disbelief. "How could you do this to yourself!"

    Danny gave her the water as someone went in the house...
     
  2. -Jake's POV-

    "Crystal, baby... I'm sorry." I looked at her with tears in my eyes... Danny and Anna were there.

    "Get out Jake!" Anna pointed her fingers at the door and yelled at me.

    Crystal grabbed her hand, "It's okay." She looked at me and said in her gentle voice, "Leave. I'll call you later."

    My heart crushed to the ground. I looked at Danny and he glared at me.

    I would never dare to cheat on Crystal, I loved her in every way possible. She completes me, she made me the happiest guy. She changed me for the better. I don't even remember doing it with Diane. We were just drinking with old friends. Yes she may had kissed me but I pushed her.

    Zachary said that she put a drug on my drink when I talked to him. I didn't feel any weird things after I woke up. Diane must be lying again.

    "I love you." I whispered to myself and walked away.

    I dialled Diane's number.

    "Diane, you're lying." I told her.

    "Jake... Just see me, please?"

    "Fine. Where?"

    "Huntington Beach, five pm."

    I nodded at myself and hanged up.

    You better explain, everything. I won't let you destroy our lives.
     
  3. LOVE IT! Very intense!!
     
  4. update!!!!!!!!!! 









     
  5. Wow…
    Bump! Update!
     
  6. Also… I don't want to advertise my story but I just started one and can you read it, eli? I want advice from the best writer evah!  it's called Lovestruck
     
  7. I read hers it's good
     
  8. Hey Eli have you been reading my two new stories?
     
  9. Yay Eli Your the best writer :) ilu (nohomo) 
     
  10. Angela, I've read it already  I didn't get to comment because I was shopping. I'm almost leaving that's why. :/

    Cherry, yes, yes I have 

    Roze, I love you more!!! (no homo)  Lol. I'm not the best!  Stephanie Meyer is  I am kidding. Idk who, but I'm in the bottom list.
     
  11. Shows how much you do lol it's party not roze 
     
  12. Oops! Sorry  I hate myself. I was in a hurry. PARTY I LOOOOOOOVE YOU. damn it 
     
  13. I got used to Roze doing that ily thing and I'd say no homo  I'm sorry
     
  14. Which ones ur fave Eli it's ok baby or I love you my dear sibling
     
  15. Nah it doesn't matter
     
  16. Cherry, the incest one 

    Party, I'll update as fast as I can for you x
     
  17. Omg wow bump