You know, I used to troll fan fiction. Pretty recently actually. All of the threads were lame ass stories and I was thinking about making a pointless thread when I saw your name as an author of this one. This is a fantastic start to a very interesting story and for once I read the entire thing. Most of the time I stop because the stories are usually horrible but this is great, I had no idea that you were such a good writer.
Tiger ?And just a thought, if you think stories are horrible, at least for mine, please feel free to post on them and give your criticism. I for one, would appreciate criticism. If you don't have criticism and suggestions, you won't be able to improve. So really, go on and give it.
I posted my opinion on a bunch of stories a little while back. I haven't had time to make my second round yet. I'll make sure to check your story out. I'm not even close to a professional writer but I do enjoy writing especially in a critiquing manner.
Sammi, it's been most of the Summer for me Tiger, if you wanna critique something, try one of the contest entries. Or, if you prefer a more personal approach, try reading my story Longplayer. It's a while back, but it should be easy to find.