Be Realistic.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by satanictitanicGenny_, Jun 25, 2012.

  1. I did. DONTYOUDAREJUDGEME-
     
  2. 0.0 Don't worry, I cried plenty reading your update.
     
  3. :'D I'm not alone.
     
  4. Keep goinggggg <3333
     
  5. One update, coming right up.
     
  6. =D I cry secretly. 0.0 No longer a secret
     
  7. Possible sadness.
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    Sweeney's POV:

    I lay on my bed, my mind flashing. I couldn't think of anything to do. I sat up, looking around my room. I saw a picture of Nellie and I, and I got an idea. I'll go visit her.

    I got up, and slipped on a grey shirt, and blue jeans. I slipped downstairs, and cut a rose from my mothers bushes. I quietly closed the door behind me, and ran down the porch steps.

    I walked down the street, turning the corner into the cemetery. I looked around, frowning. I hate this place. It's so sad. I walked around, until I saw a familiar girl sitting by her grave.

    Melodie? She must have had trouble sleeping, too. I saw tears on her red face, and I frowned. I lightly put my hand on her shoulder. "I miss her, too."
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    Hehehe-
     
  8. Melodie~

    I jumped, and covered my mouth to prevent myself to shrieking. I rubbed my red eyes.
    "Sweeney-" I cut myself off, and shut my eyes and my mouth.

    I exhaled, inhaled, and exhaled again. I began to sing again, covering my eyes and cheeks, allowing me to sing.

    I didn't want to see his reaction to me jumping at his touch, so I just kept going. After I finished, I sat in silence, for what it felt like a billion years.

    "I miss her, and I feel horrible..." I said, finally. I felt like such a damned idiot, like every move I was making was a damn mistake to another. I was going out with Sweeney, making me feel horrible.

    Nellie loved Sweeney dearly, and I knew. I kept to myself, but I couldn't help but plaster a fake smile at Nellie's brightened face everyday. I loved when she smiled, it made me happier, but I was constantly thinking about some other things...

    I spaced out, eventually dropping my arms. I stared at a rose bush, and I faded out as I started to laugh, oh so oddly...
    What the hell....
     
  9. When I'm done eating I'll update!
     
  10. Made me cry again, btw.
     
  11. ^.^ Go eat, love! =(= My writing is a bit emotional-
     
  12. Nom nom nom stupid autocorrect
     
  13. ;3 I'll update later or after my tea.
     
  14. Do you want me to update?
     
  15. Sweeney's POV:

    I kneeled next to her. "Melodie? Why are you laughing?" I said loudly. It was making me feel uncomfortable, because none of this was funny. "Why do you feel terrible? Nellie wouldn't be upset... I know she liked me..."

    I put both of my hands on her shoulders. "Stop laughing, Melodie!" I was a bit worried, now. I held her face in my hands, frowning. "Melodie Harveed. Stop. Laughing." I snapped.

    My hands were shaking, and I was blinking alot. I stumbled back. I held onto Nellie's gravestone, frowning. "Melodie!" I yelled.
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    Short, sorry.
     
  16. Melodie~

    My face was bright red, and I rubbed my temples by the time I stopped laughing. I sighed, rubbing my head.
    "Jesus Sweeney, I-I'm sorry..." I stammered, blinking several times before getting my act together.

    "I was thinking, and the irony of everything all together is hilarious. Nothing about Nellie is funny, Sweeney." I hissed slightly, standing up and brushing my legs off.
    I tugged on my sleeves.
    I pulled him to his feet, and I blinked, my eyes flashing slightly. From blood red back to green.
    I gritted my teeth. And the blood lust began.
    I shoved my hands in my pockets, bitting at my lip, staring at Nellie's grave.
    "I've become delirious since she's left. Nor have I smiled. Maybe a couple of times." I said, shaking. I was going to bite someone. But who? There was no one around except Sweeney... Oh hell no, will I? Maybe a little bite wouldn't-oh hell.
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