Be Realistic.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by satanictitanicGenny_, Jun 25, 2012.

  1. Melodie~

    A low hiss was heard from under my foot, and I pressed down harder.
    I could hear her struggling for breath.
    My sadism was kicking in, and I socked it right off track. I took my foot off her back, and kicked her, before leaving. I walked back to the cabin, and laid on my bed, right above Sweeney's bunk.

    I sighed, rubbing my eyes. I wanted to shoot her head off, like Pow!
     
  2. Bumping so I can update
     
  3. Melodie~

    I heard footsteps, his footsteps into the cabin. He didn't say anything.
    He climbed into the bed below my bunk and finally spoke,"Why?"

    "Why what?" I groaned, leaning over the railing.
    "Why you did that. You're going to be sent home!" he whispered.
    "I don't care," I said."as long as I see you, I'm fine."
     
  4. Melodie~

    I smiled slightly before going back to sleep, and my heart pounding. I loved Sweeney James Todd. And he loved me, Melodie Raine Harveed.

    I kind of giggled as I slept.
    Melodie Raine Todd. It sounded better than my name with Harveed.
    Todd.

    I admired the last name Todd. It was amazing, like the Sweeney Todd himself. He made me grin.

    I loved him dearly, and I've loved him all these years, and never said a single thing. I would never hurt Nellie's feelings, it would never feel right.

    It would make myself cry. I cared about them both, and I would never let them get hurt. Except now that I've lost Nellie, and Sweeney defends for himself, I watch over him. Making sure he doesn't try and kill anyone.
     
  5. e.e I'll update again soon. After my shower.
     
  6. Melodie~

    Awesome. Fucking insomnia so I didn't sleep. I was too busy worrying. And I'm real cranky.

    Sweeney appeared dapper, Godamnit.
    I groaned, running my eyes and staring at the ceiling. I hopped off the top bunk, not even bothering to use the stupid ladder.

    I went to go change before Sweeney was going to wake up. I tugged my jeans and and my black turtle-neck to the bathroom and changed. I brushed my messy jungle of hair out.

    Ah, Tuesday.
     
  7. FALALA-WILL UPDATE
     
  8. Melodie~

    I squeaked, looking at my reflection. I looked pretty normal. I guess. That's what I was aiming for really.

    I sat outside, waiting for everyone to wake up.
     
  9. Sweeney's POV:

    I slowly got out of bed, swinging my feet over the side. I didn't bother to brush out my hair, it's a mess. I slipped on some jeans and a black t-shirt. I slipped outside, and sat by Melodie.

    "Earlybird, eh?"
     
  10. Melodie~

    I squeaked, looking at Sweeney. I nodded.
    "I'm always up early, normally four." I said, my red hair in a tame ponytail.
     
  11. Sweeney's POV:

    "I see." Nellie was always up early, too." I smiled. They really did have a lot alike. I looked off into space, sighing.
     
  12. Melodie~

    I sighed, staring at a tree. I could read minds, but could I speak through them too? Probably not. Sweeney could read minds though.
    "Sweeney, I can hear you think. Don't think so loud." I said, picking some lint off my damned turtleneck.
    He blinked, looking at me.
    "What?"
    "I said, don't think so loud. I know what you're thinking." I said, practically repeating myself.
    He shook his head.
    "And protect your thoughts Melodie, there's some things you've thought of that I didn't think you would think of-"
    I cut him off before he made a list.
    "Okay Sweeney, I don't think I need to hear about what I think off."