Be Realistic.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by satanictitanicGenny_, Jun 25, 2012.

  1. Meep. 0.0 I updated the same time as Nellie did.Ignore my update, the really depressing one.
     
  2. TROLOLOLOL- I was like, e-e did I mess something up in my update?
     
  3. Omg, I suck. I'm writing a new one.
     
  4. Melodie~

    I held his hand tightly, my face blotched in redness, I tugged on a cracked smile. My sleeves covered my carved arms. I inhaled, squeezing his hand as we walked. I felt like I couldn't breathe anymore.

    I smiled, for real. I was sort of..happy. I was a bit of a dork, honestly. I couldn't admit much, and there was pure silence as we walked. I coughed, and I started to chuckle a bit before I began,"You know what's pretty funny?"
    I blinked, staring down at my jeans.
    "I don't think I've ever, ever worn shorts after age twelve." I bit my lip, thinking.
    I shrugged, my eyes darting at other things. I was easily distracted but as soon as I heard his voice I was like, BAM. Back to listening.
    His voice was amazing, no doubt. I wonder if he could sing...
     
  5. Melodie~

    I poked him, with a smile smile. I blinked, and paused before yawning and laughing again before asking,"Sweeney? Do you sing?"

    I had been pondering this, but I was somewhat too enchanted to ask anything. I had my fingers laced with his, a bright shade of red.
     
  6. Wow i cant describe how much i love this FF 0.0
     
  7. This is one of the best stories I've ever read. 
     
  8. :) D'awww thank you. ^^ It wouldn't be awesome without Nellie. :3
     
  9. Thank you guys! *squish* I'll update soon.
     
  10. ^.^ Lovely. *Squish*
     
  11. Sweeney's POV:

    I blinked, smiling nervously. "Well... Um... I would sing with Nellie, and that's really about it," I said quietly. "I don't sing in public, though. I smiled, looking at our hands.

    "Where would you like to go?" I asked her, scanning the woods. I jumped seeing Carly approaching us. "Shit."
     
  12. Melodie~

    I froze, and my face felt inflamed.
    Carly's smirking face made me want to explode.
    "What's wrong, Harveed? Hm?"
    I blinked, shaking.
    She had her arms folded, and she scoffed.
    "Are you too chicken to go anywhere alone?"
    I growled lowly, letting go of Sweeney's hand. This wasn't going to end well.

    "Carly, go back to your group of pricks." I hissed, pulling my hair back into a ponytail. I still looked nice, or somewhat.
    She scoffed, stepping towards me.
    "Or what? Are you going to hiss me to death?" she asked, like I wouldn't bite.
    I must've been quite rude that day, because I went ahead, and stepped up as well.
    Sweeney must've felt awkward.
    "Harveed, go back to your emo boyfriend before you get hurt." she scowled.
    I felt tears sting at my eyes, and I screamed. I started running at her, and now, I was chasing her.
    She tripped, and I cackled as I stood above her, and stepped on her back.
    "Hm? What was that?" I asked with a rude growl.

    I sure wasn't proud of myself, but I guess true demon requires rudeness. My manners weren't perfect.
     
  13. I laughed a bit.
     
  14. Hehehe everyone has a little evil in them... Even me the nicest girl in existance  >:3
     
  15.  EVIL WILL CONQUER ALL... Wait isnt it love will conquer all? 