Battlefield

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by ShadowPrincess1, May 30, 2018.

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  1. Scarred
    Scorched
    Desolate
    Dead
    Grave
    Gory
    It was a war.

    The battlefield remains aflow with blood, trickling through the trenches then overflowing the earth. Lakes of blood run through the scars of the battlefield, trying to cover up such devastation.

    Is it bad to feel pain?
    Is it bad to hurt?
    Is it bad to be upset?

    The future is scary.
    The future is unpromising.
    The future is...bleak.

    Would a kiss make the scars hurt less?
    Would compassion make a smile wide?
    Would the scars of this war vanish?
    Would the blood stop flowing out and heal?
    Would a smile really stop a war?

    This war is agony
    This death is devastating
    This end is saddening
    This world is pain
    This...isn't life.
    This is a battlefield.
     
  2. This is great
     
  3. i thought you meant battlefield the game
     
  4. How could you judge Crow but have weak sht like this? If you're gonna talk trash, make sure you're better than trash.
     
  5. why so harsh^
     
  6. Bcuz I hate people who trash talk other people who have similar passions as their own. It's nonsensical, especially when it comes to the Arts. And Crow actually has pretty good content, compared to this where it's just a linear form of repeated questions and statements.
     
  7. I'm sorry I can't get interested in his story. I'm not entertained by it so if you have an issue then continue to get mad. I will not tolerate your hatred however.
     
  8. Lock by OP request.
     
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