Ok this 1 might be short too im srry im stressed out not b/c of this though ------------------------------------------ Faith's POV: I lay awake in the bed they gave me, I was starring at the walls inside the room. The room was......boring, the walls were white, there's a T.V. in front of the bed, the bed had all white sheets. I hated it. I was used to colors, and guards outside my door, and my dad coming to kiss me goodnight. Tears sprung to my eyes, where's dad when I really need him, he was always my best friend, my dad, and even my mom. After my mom died from getting kidnapped, my dad got super protective, but I didn't complain, I felt safe when I was with my guards, but now I'm all alone, no one to trust, no one to turn to. I was repeating these words in my head, while I started to fall asleep, buy just as I was about to dream, three words came into my head, except Hunter, they said, then I fell asleep. Hunter's Dad POV: I waited patiently on the back deck of the house, checking my watch for the first time, I knew she'd be here in a few seconds. Looking up at the stars, I wondered why people liked them, to me they were annoying little pest, who won't leave the darkness alone. "Hello Roger, long time, no see."As soon as I heard her voice, I spun around. She looked beautiful, with a dress that fit her curves and showed off her legs. "Hello beautiful" I said. She smiled at me. "So, why such a urgent call, is something wrong with Hunter or is the business already failing you"she asked, while taking a seat from across to me. "The business is going quite well, I just need your help convincing, someone to sell their business and then we'll have this whole area covered with my places" I told her proundly. She pursed her lips, thinking about it, then slowing shook her head yes. "Ok, who shall I convince, this time another old billionaire"she asked, shivering with disgust. "No, just a young lady"I said, grabbing the bottle of wine off the ice bucket and pooring 2 cups. "A girl? Wonuldn't Hunter be more fitted for that, I mean you do remember I am a girl as well?"she asked confused. "Well I thought about Hunter, but then I realized he's not much of a man to handle that, plus you and the girl have history together, so I thought you would be a better choice"I said, grabbing a glass of wine and drinking it while watching her expression over the rim of the glass. She grabbed one too,drinking it slowly as she thought over what I just said. "What do you mean" she finally asked. I smiled at her. "Let me refresh your mind, do you remember that girl, that one special girl, so dear to your heart" I paused looking over her with a evil glint in my eyes. I thought I saw a expression of panic on her face, but it was gone so quickly, I assumed I imagined it. "I still don't know who it is Roger, now just tell me her name. I picked up on the hint worry in her voice, and this made my small smirk turn into a slow, evil smile. "Oh, I believe her name was...umm" I said, looking up at the sky, as if it would give me the answer. "Oh" I said, snapping my fingers."Her name was Faith, Faith Evergreen" I said and the only sound you could hear was the sound of a expensive glass hitting the floor. --------------------------------------- Ohh who's the lady? What's her history with faith? What happened to faith's dad? Find out next time Oh and tell me what you think
Oh and just to say Hunter dad name was Ronald in the beginning but in gonna change it to Rogar, just sayin so u guys wont get confused
Cherry i know that but im tryin to put a little action in it the next chapter might have more of them 2 in it
Yeah I know that it's not gonna be like: Hey my dad made me kidnap you feel sorry for me Hey I feel sorry for you I love you I love you too Let's be together secretly behind my dads back ------------------------------------------- Lol Coz that's stupid I'm just so eager
Hee hee read my story night watchers then read the second book I've been told its good I'm still writing the second book but it's gonna be a trilogy
Yayy im gettin more fans!! ----------------------------------------- Hunter's POV: I awoke suddenly to the sound of something, not knowing what it was, I quickly grabbed a shirt and rushed to Faith's room. I put my ear to the door and breathed a sigh of relief, when I didn't hear anything, but just to make sure I opened the door softly, and peaked inside. She was asleep, I could tell by her heavy breathing, I couldn't stop myself from walking up to the side of the bed, and looking at her. She was beautiful, I was falling for her. Knowing I had to find out where the sound that awoke me was at, I planted a kiss on her forehead, and went out of the door. Faith's POV: He planted a kiss on my head. I worked hard to contain my smile until after he left. As soon as he did, my heart went back to normal. I can't believe he kissed me, well on the forehead, but still, it was a kiss. As soon as his lips touched my skin, I felt like I was about to explode from happiness, but even though he kissed me doesn't mean I'm out of danger, tomorrow we'll have to form a plan, I smiled again at the fact that, that means more time with Hunter. Finally, after I had calmed down, I went back to sleep, dreaming about a princess and prince. Hunter's POV: As soon as I left Faith's room, I hurried downstairs, wondering if someone had broken end, but when I got down there, everything seemed normal, then I heard talking. I recognized my father's voice, but I couldn't place the second person, but they sound vaguely familiar. I followed the voices out to the deck, till finally I could see them, I was leaning on the wall and inched forward to see who the second person was, but the sight in front of me made my blood turn hot with anger. There on the deck was a lady, a LADY. How dare he cheat on mom like that. I threw open the door, not caring wether I broke it, and marched right over to my dad, not even bothering to take a glance at the lady. My dad had a look of shock, on his face. "How dare you cheat on mom, you have done some messed up stuff in the past, but this this is the end, what the hell is wrong with you?" I yelled this in his face, my face red with anger. My father just smirked and started to sip his wine, but as soon as he put it to his lips, I hit it out his hand. My father just froze, and looked at where the glass fell, then slowly he turned his cold eyes toward me, no one didn't say a thing as me and my father glared each other down. "Honey, it's alright, I am your mother" I heard, instantly I turned around and looked at the lady and then did I realize that it was my mother. I quickly forgot about my dad and went and picked her up embracing her in a hug. "Hunter, your mother is tired, show her to her room and leave her alone."Hearing my dad's orders I grabbed my mother's hand and we went upstairs so I could show mother her room. Hunter's Dad POV: I looked after them as they walked upstairs, I hated both of them, I couldn't wait till I break both of them apart, then I'll be truly happy. As I waited for the butler to bring me my drink, I thought over my plan and how it was going as I had planned, when the butler brung me my drink, I looked up at him. "Did you hear what me and my wife were talking about" I asked him. He shook his head yes. "You better not share this information with anyone" I made sure to put a edge to my voice, to scare him. He shook his head yes again. --------------------------------------- Ok my ipod is about to die and i cant find the charger but when I do ill start on a new chapter with more Faith and Hunter, but FYI this story isnt just about romance so if thats all you want you might not want to read it anymore just sayin love ya bye
You've got a new fan here!!Just some advice: try fixing your paragraphing, spelling and grammatical errors. As much as possible when the sentence gets too long, break it and form a new one. P.S I love it I think you may want to form a love triangle