Sorry guys. Just been busy, plus I haven't felt like writing. I'll do a short update today/tomorrow...
Bump. Yeah that's right, I'm reviving my story. I'll have an update sometime this week. I think ill reveal who the characters are, meh.
I just realized I've had an update, it's just not finished. So I'll finish it during my lunch time and I'll post. Huh.
Neiths shoulders shook violently as she sobbed silently in the deserted highschool hallway. Wiping her cheeks with the back of her hand she allowed herself to slide down the concrete wall onto the cold, tiled floor. Knees up to her chest as she tried to control her sobs, not wanting to make a sound. A pair of strong hands begin to pull her up, in confusion Neith looks up, it's Jack. She had become so upset she'd become oblivious to her surroundings and allowed Jack to see her in this horrible state. "Neith why are you out here?" his thumb glides across her cheeks, wiping away the tears. "Why are you crying ba-Neith?" His faced was covered with the look of concern. Neith sniffled before answering him, "It's nothing. Nicolai just thought I could use a rebound." She looked up at the ceiling her bottom lip quivering as the tears began to fall again, "I don't...know..why...I'm-I'm-I'm..." Her words came out in spurts, unable to finish her sentence. "Hey calm down Neith, you don't need to explain anything to me. I know what you're tryin to say." His arms moved her books away from hers and he set them down. Once back to eye level with Neith he pulled her into a caring embrace, arms holding her tight and safe. Neith could smell the Domain cologne he always wore, mixed in with the scent of his Old Spice deodorant. His fingers played with the ends of her hair, she closed her eyes and took a deep breath; taking in his scent. "Better?" His hold loosened, allowing her to move back to look at him. "I didn't think Nicolai would have the balls to ask you this quickly..." Jacks facial expression suddenly turned dark, offended by Nicolai's advancement towards Neith. "Nicolai doesn't have respect for girls...women." A loud sigh is heard from Neith. "But I told him off, I'm sure it'll be the school buzz..." She could feel Jacks eyes on her, making butterflies form in her stomach. The control he had over her and he didn't even know. She watched him, in silence, pull is cellphone out to check the time. "Bell's about to ring, need to head back to class. Will you be alright for the rest of the day Neith?" He reaches out and touches her cheek, his fingers gliding over to push some hair behind her ear. "Beautiful." He smiled. "Yeah. Jack...can you explain why..?" She grabbed his hand and held it tight, her brown eyes looked at him with a yearning look. "Neith you won't like the answer. I don't think you're ready to hear it, but I'll tell you if you really want to know." Gently he lifted his hand away from hers, backing up a little. Jack watched her as she chewed at the bottom of her lip, waiting for her to speak. "No, I don't want to know. But I want to hear it eventually. Will you tell me when I'm ready?" She acted like she wasn't hurt by how he moved away so quickly, how he moved away from her touch. Neith licked her lips several times, not caring that it'd cause them to chap. Jack nodded and looked at his watch. He gave Neith a sorry smile before heading off to his class, slightly looking over his shoulder at her. Neith watched him disappear into a classroom, her chest heaved as she exhaled loudly. The bell rang loudly, Neith cringed as she looked up to see that she'd been standing under the bell the whole time. It rang annoyingly for 3 steady minutes, then the students began to file out of the classrooms. Her fellow classmates gave her fleeting glances still in awe by her quiet, but very enraged, outburst she had in class. Neith stuck her foot out slowly, not looking behind her as she did, Nicolai's feet tripped over hers. Being distracted, by the well bloomed girl that had caught his attention earlier, he didn't see the childish attack Neith had prepared for him. Nicolai fell, and being a well muscled boy he fell hard. The students about him roared out in laughter as the football jock was taken down by a 6 size shoe. "How childish Sister." A chuckling Kain said as he leaned on his sister looking at Nicolai as he stood and sheepishly laughed. Neith shrugged a shoulder, "Satisfaction was delivered Brother." Kain looked over at his sister, even though she wasn't smiling her body radiated happiness in some way. He had watched Jack and her converse, he watched as Jack touched his beloved sister, tainting her with his new girlfriends smell. Neith didn't mind, because when Jack walked into the room she'd swoon, when Jack smiled at her; she'd blush. Jack...he had stolen Neith from him, and by whatever means Kain would get her back. His rage grew as he pondered about how he use to be the only one to make Neith like that, he restrained his actions and walked with Neith to her next class.
Sorry that is update is so boring, but it happens. I'll try to make the next update a little more exciting.