Seeing how my mouth has nothing to do with this, I'll forget you said that. And the fact that I'm nowhere near anything called "babe", I'll just act like you didn't post. Run on back to your little friend Jess. You pathetic child like behaviors are not wanted here. Much Love -Ryan<3
Ohhh my Gish!! You make me laugh! This has nothing to do with Jess! I read this, and I think it's too formalif the guy actually maybe had a personality, then it would be good think of it as criticism for the future P.s.. Don't get to excited Hun, I call everyone babe
Seeing how it's a manual, it's suppose to be formal. How would you like to read the instructions on how to do something with a bunch of sarcasm? Also, why would you post criticism here when the author is A. Dead and B. Not the one that posted this? I still think you are being childish because of my opinion towards Jess's story. Whatever though. I'm off to bed. -Ryan
Bahaha I really thought this was your story so I read most of the prologue. I had to scroll through everything before I realized what this was.
Lol, it Im not posting any more of it. If you want the last 6 chapters search for them on the Internet. I find this to be strange as well..