Well, for anyone still waiting for updates, the book is finally finished, it's 11 chapters long and it's one heck of a journey!
I tried to look it n but got confused coz dont know who saying what. You did it on the 1st bit but not the 2nd bit
That's because you should know whose talking, if I haven't mentioned anyone else and I end one quotation it goes to the next person talking, you can't add the he said she said everytime, it looks ugly that way
If you can't differentiate between 2 characters having a conversation after I had said who was talking first and who had replied, than is it really the author's fault or is it the readers fault for not knowing how to read? Sorry I didn't want to put who was talking after every response a character had, imagine how dumb it'd look then