artist cafe lyrical, visual and poet

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by the_destroyer, Nov 6, 2012.

  1. Brittani might want to check the copyright law aswell..
     
  2. I had a cat
    He ate a rat

    Then when he shat
    He found the rat

    It then transformed into a cat
    And now i have another cat
     
  3. Ppl like your wife steal them and then post them on websites. However, some of us have more creative abilities in them and don't have to plagiarize poems and stories. And FYI...I thought of you today has a nice new copywrite. Have a good day.
     
  4. Copyright****
     
  5. Into the fray~

    This is my own poem, but it's based off of a movie I just watched recently.

    What silences,
    all dwell too much,
    and for what stands.
    Each moment,
    each breath,
    can crush you in demand.
    The last time I rise,
    is what I see fallen,
    and what finds sorrow,
    is blood on my hands.
    They crown them worthy,
    and the only think I see,
    is my own ripped apart,
    in their twiddling ecstasy.
    I will try to be part of them,
    and I'm terrified.
    But it's all part of a stem,
    of the face mortified.
    Going into the fray,
    and what I stand,
    is my own will,
    and their faces on my hands.


    Of course, I'm not that depressing, but I get ideas every time something random pops up, so hey.
     
  6. My wife has never submitted a single poem, I've watched her sit down and write so I know she can write, she has talent.
     
  7. It seems like most poetry nowadays is dark.
     
  8. Well good for your wife.
     
  9. . Each person has had a poem or story stolen and passed off as someone else's. it's heartbreaking, but it happens. It doesn't bother me. I'm honored someone likes my writing enough to try and pass it off as their own. It's when ppl accuse me of plagiarism that I get upset. My sisters helped me with that poem, to dedicate to Miller. They can vouch for it and for me. I've gotten awards for my short stories and poems, and I've learned not to make them public until the copyright patents have been approved for this very reason. At 17, I did not know that. I posted my poems on websites cause I wanted to share my best work with ppl. I know better now. Please do not insult my intelligence or my morals in such a way. Thank you.
     
  10. I know, I think there's going to be a darker age of art sooner or later.
     
  11. I kinda like dark poetry 
     
  12. Dark poetry always has a deeper meaning. That's why they're so much more interesting to read than others.
     
  13. Well good for you, everyone is entitled to their opinions, and I think it's great.
     
  14. You have a point. But my poetry comes from randomness. 
     
  15. Roses are red, violets are blue, poems are hard, I like bacon.
     
  16. Nothing

    Vast emptiness of everything
    Blank walls and colorless features
    Surrounding everything
    And nothing

    Trapped in a wasteland
    Full of hatred and sorrow
    Yet happiness and life
    And nothing

    The world is gone
    Yet still here somehow
    But with chaos and destruction
    All for nothing

    Trying to hard to fit in
    Being pushed aside
    And walked all over
    Like you're nothing

    It's all over now
    Death is a sweet escape
    And you do it because
    There's nothing


    I wrote this a while back. So it's not the best but I thought it was pretty cool to share.
     
  17. These are two poems my dad wrote and he did submit then onto a website and they are on display but it's his poem so don't try to say that he copied it! Thank you! 

    Paradise Lost

    Many years have passed away
    Since last he saw her face
    The man she knew, now cold and gray
    Recalls their last embrace

    "Was it yesterday? Or so it seems
    My memories seem so gray
    We danced in a land of hopes and dreams
    To pass the time of day

    More than lovers from the start
    Our bliss had a dreadful cost
    A terrible sickness cost my heart
    And I left her in Paradise lost

    A life long and cold for my beloved
    To match her broken heart
    A love of life and a life of love
    Was a dream she was not part

    Now she feels my love around her
    As she draws her final breath
    Her love at last, has come for her
    As from God she did request."


    A Denied Love

    Nine months was all God would give
    And the happiness of their love
    Twenty-six years was all she lived
    As allotted by God above

    Stuffed toys and other cherished tokens
    Now lie beside her bed
    His one regret, though still unspoken
    Was that they never wed

    "God will see the injustice." They say
    But what about the broken heart that lay
    Shattered on the ground, so cold?
    Nevermore to hold for whom the bell tolls

    Yet, through it all he knows too well
    The miracle that awaits him
    That when his time on Earth expelled
    She'll once again embrace him

    So do not weep for him my friends
    For one thing more is certain
    I'll envy him for his love so cleansed
    When he draws that final curtain.
     
  18. Radio, work and literature,
    is to me like one great adventure,
    doesn't come fast, no way easy,
    yes, what a labour, all it keeps you busy.

    Radio to listen, while at home?
    No my son that would be bore.
    One has to work to listen wireless,
    who doesn't toil stays FM clueless.

    And where come literature in this story?
    Do you ask me? You don't know? You're sorry?
    Well on break my dear friend, collegue, comarade,
    When on break the gift of scripture's a merit.
     
  19. Loving these poems. I might just have to write more.