~Among Us Are The Fallen Ones~

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Live_Like_The_Last, Feb 20, 2013.

  1. Sorry its been taking so long to update guys! I was going to update last night, but I went to the Rascal Flatts concert, and didn't get home until 3A.M! Anyways, here's the new update! ~Keely

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    We finally all choose a place to eat, Burger King. We pulled up to the parking, and all hopped out.

    "What are you going to get?" I asked.
    "Hmmm. I don't know. Grilled-chicken sandwich?" she said.
    "I'm trying to get something without to many calories. I seriously need to lose some weight!" I said.
    Cameron laugh "You look amazing. You don't need to lose any weight, Keely."

    I smiled "Thanks Cameron."
    I thought to myself 'He always calls me by my name. He doesn't have a cute nickname for me.'
    I felt funny thinking like that. Of course, he was my boyfriend, but still. Keely?

    After a hour of all sitting together and talking I needed to use the restroom. 'I can't leave Cameron alone with Kelsey. I couldn't!' I thought to myself.
    "Kelsey, come with me?" I asked.
    "I'm good. I'll stay here and keep Cameron company." she replied.

    I knew there was no reason to fight with her about it, so I went straight to the bathroom. 'Please don't do anything stupid, Kelsey!' I thought to myself.

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    Kelsey's Point Of View
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    'This is my chance!' I thought to myself. Keely left for the restroom, so I could ask Cameron all about them. Right when she left I asked as many question I could get out at once.
    "How long have to you been dating? Where all have you taken her? Have you met her mother? Do you know her dads dead? Have you kissed her?!"

    He just looked at me. "Her dads dead?"

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    Cameron's Point Of View
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    I looked at Kelsey.
    "Her dads dead?" Kelsey automatically covered her mouth.
    "Oh my gosh! Did I really just blurt that out?!"
    I shook my head yes. "How long?"
    "How long what?" she seemed confused.
    "How long has he been dead?" I asked once more.
    "A year." she said.
    "It must be hard for her." I said. I was upset for her. Who wouldn't be?
    "It's tough, but she's a strong girl, just like her mother. She'll make it through it."

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  2. Awesome job wo wo haha
     
  3. Kelsey really?!! Lol bumpdate
     
  4. Awwww hes sweet tho!! Bump
     
  5. Kelsey, Kelsey, Kelsey,
    Y DID U JUST DO THAT!!!
    but i thought that part was cool
    bump!!!
     
  6. Damn it Kelsey!
     
  7. Um... Doesn't he call her 'Angel'?
     
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    I came back from the bathroom. I could tell by the look on Kelsey's face she blurted out something she didn't need to.

    Cameron seemed strangely upset. I couldn't tell why.
    "Cameron, what's wrong?"
    "Oh, nothing Angel. I'm just thinking about something." he replied.
    "Oh, okay." I noticed it right then 'Angel' I thought to myself 'He calls me Angel!'

    We made our way back to the parking lot.
    Once outside , Cameron said "Can I come by your house Angel, we need to talk."
    "Sure." I was confused. 'What do we need to talk about? He is breaking up with me? What's happening?' I started asking myself all different questions.

    I made it back to my house, and only a few moments later Cameron pulled in the driveway behind me.
    He grabbed my hand and smiled "Let's go inside."
    "Okay." I smiled back. 'He grabbed my hand, maybe he's not dumping me.' I thought.

    We came inside, and were greeted by my sister Ashley.
    "Hi." Ashley said, her eyes getting wide seeing me holding hands with Cameron.
    "Hello." he smiled.
    I coughed awkwardly. "Ashley, this is Cameron my boy----- "Boyfriend?!" Ashely screamed.
    I nodded my head yes.

    "Oh you two are so cute."
    We both laughed and said "Thanks."
    "Well, I'll leave you two alone." she said bouncing up the stairs to her room.

    "Sorry about her she's crazy."

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    Ashley's Point Of View
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    'Ha.' I thought to myself.
    Cameron was hot.
    I couldn't believe he was dating my low-life little sister.
    I planned from the moment I laid eyes on him, he would be mine. No matter what it took.


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    Cameron's Point Of View
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    Keely's sister was unusual. She was too preppy and happy.
    If Keely wouldn't have Introduced her I would have never guessed they were sister.
    They looked nothing alike.
    I wondered if she was adopted.
    I planned on talking to Keely about her father if she'd open up and talk to me about it.
    I wanted to know what happened. I was so curious.

    I wanted to ask about her family, and see what she would tell me. Then, maybe, hopefully, she'd tell me what happened.
    I don't know why, but it seemed I cared to much.

    I've never felt this way before. I love Keely. I don't want to hurt her. I plan on keeping it that way.

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  9. Ashely is mean trying to take her sisters boyfriend...Cameron is super sweet though!! Updateee
     
  10. Ashley is going to be a big prob. especially since Cameron doesnt seen to like her at all
     
  11. Sorry guys! I can't update tonight! I have a huge test tomorrow that's 50% of my entire grade! I'll either update tomorrow morning or night. Whatever I can do. Thanks!
    ~Keely
     
  12. Wait. I haven't read that far but this seems like an exact plagiarism of Twilight.
     
  13. Okayyy good luck
     
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    After, Ashley bounced up stairs, I looked at Cameron.
    "Ha. She's crazy. Something I'll never get used to."
    "Is she adopted, because you two look nothing alike." Cameron asked.
    "Actually, she is. She's actually from New York. My mom and step-father went on their honey moon, and came back with her." I said rolling my eyes.

    I knew Cameron saw me roll my eyes, because he burst into laughter.
    "That bad Angel?"
    "Yes. She's been a pain ever since. She's one year older, than me, and still acts like she's two years old." I replied.

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    Ashley's Point Of View
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    I could hear the little bitch and her boyfriend talking about me in my room. I think she wanted me to hear it considering she was almost yelling through the whole damn house. I don't know why she hates me so much, but when I'm done with her, she's gonna wished she hadn't.

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    Cameron's Point Of View
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    After fifteen more minutes of talking about Keely's sister, I finally changed the subject. Her dad. I needed to know.
    Finally, I asked "I've kinda met your mom, but why not your dad?"
    Tears formed in her eyes. Right then I felt horrible. My own curiosity left my girlfriend crying.
    I grabbed her hands, and pulled her towards me. I nuzzled up with her until she stop crying.
    Finally, chocking back her last tears, she mumbled "He was murdered."

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  15. Awww hes such a sweethearttt
     
  16. ooooo
    bump!
     
  17. 0.0 bump her sis gunna get it