~Among Us Are The Fallen Ones~

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Live_Like_The_Last, Feb 20, 2013.

  1. I wanna see some horror in this story
     
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    After my horrible melt down I finally just put the roses in a vase, then went to my room. I eventually feel asleep. Next thing I knew I was awoken by the sound of glass breaking. I jump out of bed and ran to the kitchen.

    "Mom?" She was crying. She broke the vase, and was now sitting on the floor chopping off the top of the roses. "Mom? What are you doing? Are you okay?" My head seemed to spin. 'Why was she acting like this?' I thought.

    After, a few moments of calming her down I walked her to her room, and stayed in their until she fell asleep. I didn't know why, but tonight I was the parent calming the child.

    The next few days went by in a blur. Everything seemed 'different'. I didn't know why, but I didn't want to know either. 'Sometimes it's better to know nothing at all. The truth can hurt.' I thought to myself.

    Monday. The weekend was finally over. Mom wanted to go back to work. "Are you sure this is what you want mom?" I asked. I was still confused about why she acted the way she did the other night. It sort-of frightens me to think about it. I shuddered. "Yes, honey. I want to go. I already called my boss and told him I would be coming back to work today. I won't be home until 9." I frowned. '9?! That long? Really!' I thought.

    I knew I couldn't stop my mom from going so I didn't. After we finished our conversation I went to get dressed for school. I pick out black skinny jeans, a fluffy red shirt, and a pair of ballet black shoes. I got dressed did my makeup and ate some breakfast.

    Mom told me since she was working until 9 I needed to take my own car. 'Duh!' I thought to myself. I couldn't help it. I kissed my mom goodbye, grabbed my purse, phone, and money, then I walked out the door.

    I walked to my car opened the door and climbed in. In the seat across from me I found a note. It's said "I'm watching you Keely. You can't get away. You can't stop me. You'll never even know I'm here."

    There was a tap on my car window. I screamed...

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  3. Bump bump. Im bumping lol. Bumpitybumpitybump update asap
     
  4. Awwwww its not the romantic story and perfect story.... :(
     
  5. Jordan, no story can ever be perfect.
     
  6. Ummm i ment the perfect romance one
     
  7. Mind if i do some free advertising here :-/ :-( :-D everyone check out my story

    ~~>Life before my eyes<~~

    and BUUUUUMP wheres the u.d. lol
     
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    I screamed...

    I looked out my window it was Kelsey. "Kelsey?!" I practically screamed. She jumped "What?" "You scared me half to death!" she laughed. "Sorry!" I handed her the piece of paper I found in my car. "What about it?" she ask confusingly. "Read it." I said. She turned the paper around. "There's nothing on it Keely."

    "What?! B-b-ut it said!" I felt like crying I knew something was on there. "It said what Keely?" she sounded annoyed. "Never mind. It doesn't matter." "Okay." she said sleepy. "I walked over here to see if I could get a ride to school." "Sure Kelsey. Hop in." I smiled slightly. "Thanks. Lunch this afternoon? My treat." "Ha. Okay. I need to get out the house anyways. It's been awkward." I said. "Awkward how?"

    I explained about the other night with my mom and everything. "Maybe it was some freak thing." she said. "I don't know, but it's creeping me out." "She'll be fine Keely. Your mom's a strong woman, she'll get through it." I smiled. "Thanks Kelsey." I gave her a huge bear hug.

    We pulled up at the school and Cameron was waiting outside for me. Just a guess. Kelsey said "You go get him girl!" and winked at me and ran off. My guess about Cameron was correct. He was waiting for me. When he noticed me he smiled. Dazzled! I smiled back at him, and ran into his arms. He picked me up and swung me around a few times, then set me back on the ground, and kissed my forehead.

    The day went by blurry. My memory was kinda fuzzy for some reason. I didn't know why. Finally school was over. I walked to my locker to meet Kelsey. Cameron came with me. Kelsey finally made it to my locker "Hey. Sorry I had to get make-up work from last week." she smiled shyly. "Well, are you ready to go?" "Ye-- Where are you going?" Cameron butted in. "Kelsey's gonna take me somewhere for lunch". He smiled. Kelsey spoke up and said "Wanna come with?" "I'd love to." he said.

    With that we made our way into town.

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  9. Bump!
    Jordan :roll: She needs to add a twist. It can't be typical.. Cameron and Keely fall in love... Blah blah blah
     
  10. I like this update!
    And thenerdyone its fiction...
     
  11. And... What does that prove?
     
  12. Its not real it can be whatever the writter wants
     
  13. I liked it how it was all sweet n romantic before people told her to change it
     
  14. Guys listen up! This is my story! I'm changing it! I don't listen to anyone's suggestions, because it's my story! I'm not trying to make anyone mad at me because I love you all. Your amazing! If it wasn't for you guys I wouldn't even be writing this story! Please don't fight over it. It's a story. If you like one part you like it. If you don't like one part you don't. Please stop giving my "Helpful" ideas. I think my story is perfectly fine how I'm writing it. My story has even inspired someone to write there own! Please just stop. Thanks,
    Keely S.
     
  15. I love this story Keely
     
  16. :roll: If she kept it sweet and romantic, I'll get super bored of this story. :|
     
  17. Its really good o and
    BUMP!!
     
  18. I love it sweetie and I wouldn't change it anymore good writing you can only improve