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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Flowerangel, Jul 21, 2011.

  1. And Star Wars, Star Wars II, possibly Star Wars III, (cant remember) LEGO Star Wars, LEGO Indiana Jones, Monster 4x4 World Circuit, and LEGO Batman. :D Let's just say I go in my brother's room a lot.
     
  2. Lol wow I sometimes play box X but not a lot
     
  3. Haha sorry flower
     
  4. I just did a character bio in the other forum thing and would love it if you added me to the story
     
  5. Updating today 
     
  6. I picked up her phone to see what it said.
    From: Harry
    "Beth is in the hospital, we got in a car accident."
    Wow, I thought. She was trying to prevent from her big sister dying.
    As Mickayla got back up Hill and I took her out to Hill's car and we drove her to the hospital. We sat in the waiting room with Mickayla and she sat there and cried on my shoulder as Hill held my hand. I whispered in Hill's ear,"I really love you Hill."
    He smirked and kissed my lips so sweetly and we started making out in a hospital as my new friend was crying on my shoulder. One of Beth's doctors came in and said that Beth will be fine and Mickayla can now visit her so I hugged Mickayla and me and Hill started going down in the elevator and saw a mom with a newborn baby and her husband right next to them and I smiled squeezing Hill's hand harder. I knew that was gonna be us someday. We got in the car and Hill blasted up the radio and we drove back to Sophie's.

    When we got back, a lot of people were gone. Sophie was sleeping on the couch on top of Luje and a bottle of vodka in her hands. Sean and Delilah were sleeping in Sophie's bed. Some random people I didn't know were in Sophie's dining room playing spin the bottle. I turned on a sweet slow dance song and Hill grabbed my hand and pulled me close and I put my head on his soft shoulder and we danced.
     
  7. I'll maybe do another update later today 
     
  8. I love this! It may be better with Mayrine ( my character) in it ;)D
     
  9.  oh and when i turned the music in the car.. It was some rock

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  10. I really really like your story:)
     
  11. This is AMAAAAAZINGGG!!!!!
     
  12. U guys really like it? 
     
  13. You should write more