All mistakes made

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Flowerangel, Jul 21, 2011.

  1. I'm such a moment ruiner!!!llolol
     
  2. Micky the Moment Ruiner. I like that. It suits you Micky. lol
     
  3. Ik I'm mad at you!!! 
    Jk 
    My choice. 
     
  4.  didn't see that coming  but still good story 
     
  5. It's supposed to be a romance story/ mystery.
     
  6. Cool 
     
  7. 
     
  8. I updated 3 times today  I'll try to within an hour.
     
  9. As I pulled into the parking lot of the park, I saw Mickayla looking down talking to herself at a bench while a little kid and a young adult female were playing frisbee.
    I got out and walked over to her.
    "Hi Mickayla."
    "Hey Kailyn, sorry to bring you here but, I really need help."
    "Alright, I'm here for you." I said with a smile.
    "Ok, well I'm at this school because I'm from the future and it's really miserable and there are things that need to be fixed and I got the chance. Both of my parents are dead and me and my sisters live alone," I just looked at her, feeling bad for her,"that's my little sister Riley, she's 7, and that's Beth, she's 22." She kept talking as she was looking at her beautiful sisters that were playing frisbee. "They don't know that I came back in time. I didn't choose it, Beth dies in the future and I'm fixing that by choosing a new school and I really hope you don't think I'm crazy."

    I just looked at her and stared.
    "Wow." I was shocked at the sound of my voice. "Really? Because.. I'm from the future too. I'm here to fix everything with my family and friends and boyfriend. We all disconnect in my future, and I need to prevent that."
    She nodded and hugged me,"I chose to talk to you because you seemed like something was wrong."
    I smiled. "I'll keep the secret." And we shook hands and went our separate ways.
     
  10. Thanks guys. I'm glad you like it. I'm new to writing on fan fic and this is my first story 
     
  11. Nice 
     
  12. Lol laurel....I ruin moments alot im loving this story!!!! I want more girl!!!
     
  13. She sleeping  she will update asap 
     
  14. Updating soon 